Zainab Siddiqui:

I really like the camera angles here. Very expressive! :)

Shawn Savage:

nice job, i like how you set it up

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Nice timing and anticipation. The weight balances could be refined to make it a great animation..

Mike DeGar:

Hmm this ones a toughy i keep getting distracted by the blanket/tarp. Anyways I think you did a good job on this one, lipsynchs look great and soo does the body animations. Good job. :)

Joseph Leung:

Nice work. It seems like the lip sync was a bit off in some parts like on the word "murder."

Ryan Lowe:

best one ive seen yet. polish lacks, but you know that. the dial was tough this month huh? lots of people cant get most of the phenomes down.

Russell:

Several parts throughout have very stiff shoulders and apparent Ik arms. Be careful when using Ik, because your arcs will suffer. Keeping a good arc is important to maintain the realism in movement.

The blanket is too floaty. Increase the gravity field if you are using dynamics.

Some of the acting choices are a little weak. When Red Shirt Guy says "Now", he points to something. When someone says "Now" do they point to an object, or to emphasize their idea?

Noel O'Malley:

Good character poses. I think different staging/camera angles could improve this a little. Well done.

Erik Westlund:

There appears to be a larger story behind this animation. That's a good thing. Much of the acting performances are staged in the distance instead of close-up. Line of action for both characters tends to remain vertical for the majority of this sequence. Hand movements tend to move inside of silhouettes of characters. Spend more time on planning... lest on cloth sym.

James O'Neill:

I feel the camera cut is confusing, especially because one character is completely blocking another for a few frames. Try no camera cut, it can be stronger, and lets the animation do more of the storytelling.

Justin Weg:

Looks good but the camera makes it looked warped.

Chris de Souza:

This one is nice but that first cut is very jarring. The characters switch sides (until he sits down) and that breaks the continuity.

Adrian Baluta:

In general is good,but the eyes expression there are the same and not so good used.

Ezra Allen:

not sure about the point on "now" whats he pointing at?

with the lipsynch "authorities" doesnt seem to be working at the moment.

Like the performance on the guy with the black spicky hair. "with what weve got bupkis" worked out pretty well.

Romain Digonnet:

Very nice animation.
The camera chage doesn't work for me though, either it's because of the new angle or the animation of the charcter puting his head in his hands isn't natural...

Taber Dunipace:

Everything is happening so fast, it doesn't give us time to enjoy some of the motion and give a more subtle feeling to certain actions.

RJay Bengelink:

Fantastic expression on the dark shirted Character on frame 140 "murder".

pep:

i like the set up and the use of cloth.

sharad kumar:

very good!..the character in the red shirt cud be made more stronger though..

Paul Vicol:

I liked it!

But the red shirt guy's eyes look a bit strange, like they're really 2D...
Otherwise, nice work!