Scott Douglas:

Great acting choices!

Sarah North:

The older guy is great! Realy love the esspressive eyes on him

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Very nice entry. Timing, poses and lipsynch are cool in a pretty realistic way.

Brandon:

Outstanding! I thought the animation was darn near perfect, and the camera work was great!

Ryan Lowe:

very good acting.

Louis Ng:

Nice! I like several of your acting choices, fits the dialogue nicely.

When Andy says "great", his glass hand seemed to jerk a bit (too little frames in between poses), and it seems rather stiff. A tiny bit more of overlap for the hand in relation to the arm will be nice.

In the beginning, before Alfred spoke, Andy already sort of started to notice Alfred. It would be nicer if Andy make the "expression" of noticing Alfred only AFTER Alfred start saying "it's time. . . "

Great stuff, glad to see it!

Virgil Tanasa:

pretty good. i wonder if the reaction of the purple guy from the start of the clip would have been nicer to happen after the blue guy started to talk.
the walk looks very linear....maybe the expressions of the purple guy at the end could have been pushed more?

Michel Giguère:

Good work. Good camera, moving cameras don't always give good results, but yours work. Maybe it needs stronger original poses to make it more convincing.
Well done.

Ken Rice:

Good animation - ending could be stronger though.

Erik Westlund:

Very natural and realistic appearance to poses and acting choices. Nice use of staging... good continuity of action and screen movement. Camera shake around 220 seems like a bit of a crutch. You have greater variety of facial poses (asymmetry) in screen left character. Pose on "...turn ourselves in NOW..." needs better use of anticipation and overshoot to deliver energy. Final pose on, "Bupkis!" is lacking the intensity of audio and pose is very balanced and therefor static. Good acting but energy falls short now and then.

Joe Garhan:

really nice shots I like this a lot and you didnt over do the motions like most of the animation this month!

Marco Palmieri:

not bad. need to work on your lip sync. bit sloppy! take out the camera shake. don't need it.

Carlos Fins:

Purple guy pops into his walk. I think the finger point down on 2nd char is clishe. Other than that, this is a really good piece. Nice gestures.

Romain Digonnet:

Nice animation and good camera work...
I prefere the animation of the old guy that the kid, but that might be because I don't like the kid rigg that much.

Ali Tezel:

Great acting.

Sam Caudill:

Good use of the camera. I really like the camera-shake when he pounds his fist down

Paul Ramsden:

not bad, just needs new clothes haha

Phillip Johnson:

Really good shot, nice acting choices.

sharad kumar:

good!....but that bupkis pose can be made stronger...keep it up!

Sarah Ricketts:

Cool, I think that flows really well!!

jonas bech:

he look to young to have that voice

James:

Great stuff

Micah Betts:

Really good work here.The camera shake is questionable, he doesn't seem to be slamming the table hard enough to cause it. Otherwise excellent work and very smooth animation with good acting choices.

Joaquin Bello:

nice camera moves

Ken Vass:

quicker snaps into poses....they happen kind of late for most accents

chloé:

Good work !
The character with his glass does not seem to look in the right direction. Especially at the end, he has a large strabismus.

sean connolly:

i liked your acting choices. something that caught my eye is when the character says "now" and hits the table. it felt a bit late and maybe a frame too slow. try taking out a frame and moving that up so he hits the table right on "now" or maybe a frame before.