Jeffrey Dekker:

That shorter character was all over the place at the start of the clip. Try to tone down some of his movements.

Brandon:

The short guy creeping around seeming a bit distracting.

Jon Houston:

pretty stiff, more action on the "bupkiss" character

Ryan Lowe:

idea is great. animation lacks.

Joseph Leung:

The guy in the middle's feet look like they are stuck in something, because the legs are in the same spot.

Teri:

The second voice character seems pinned to the ground (his legs never really move). Try moving him around a bit. Also - his stomach is pinching in some of the poses - try arching the controllers a little to smooth that out. The first character is fun to watch. :) Good job.

Dan Dulberger:

The guy sneaking around stole too much attention. If you would have had him interact with (ie sneak more closely to) the tall guy during the sneak you would' not have directed attention so far away from the tall guy while he speaks.

Russell:

I like the idea. It looks like you filmed reference footage because the movements seem to hold onto realism.

Some of the poses are a little funky. The ending pose of Max sort of looks like he is blowing a kiss, not being exasperated.

On your walk cycle, bob the head and hips to show the weight transfer.

Nice job!

James O'Neill:

I like Sam movements. Fairly natural. Blokes movement is a bit confusing, I would ask what his motivation is for moving around Sam? Try to be more clear with that.

Erik Westlund:

Nice concept of one character circling the other. Provides contrast between characters. Central character needs to respond a little more to the behavior of the character circling him. Movement pops a little.