J K:

Very cool.

The tall guys walk looks wierd. Looks like he is always ready to run.. but never does. Shift his weight back.

Zainab Siddiqui:

Lip synch almost looks a bit off to me but I love the movement on the little guy

sean connolly:

these guys have some real strong personality to them. the can was a very good prop to show that. the cut you use a little akward. i would find and action you can cut on. also when the tan guy points down and then pulls his hand away keep it moving back.

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Nice idea to have them walking, but I think it made it difficult to get strong poses.

Brandon:

Pretty good. Love the little blue guy. The tall one seems a bit stiff and unrefined.

Ryan Lowe:

saw this in wip. walk cycle is great. thats it.

Jonathan Wondrusch:

I liked the walk on the tan character a lot, and I like some of the acting choices youve got going on. I think you could push the poses a bit more, especially when Generi says "murder". Good piece!

Jon Houston:

could be tightened up more, kinda stiff

M.Bell:

And the award for 'The most steps taken in any 10 or 11 second club entry I've ever seen!' goes to..... YOU! Congratulations! I really like Generi / Blue Guy. I think you pulled off some great work here. I just wish it didn't stop so suddenly at the end.

Mariah:

Good walk cycles!

Virgil Tanasa:

it starts good, but it ends quite bad... some jerky movement there.
also some poses don't really seem to fit, like the one blue guy has on "murder"

Erik Westlund:

Nice staging at the end but the tall character's facial reaction does not match with the aggressive gestures he just used. Its as if he goes from aggressive to decisive in less than five frames. Downward finger point on "...NOW while we can..." is not authentic. Looks forced.

Christopher Salamat:

Camera should be in closer if the characters are walking and talking so we can focus on what they are saying. Cut is placed in a bad spot and even seems unnecessary. Pretty good with the animation. The tall character's lip-sync needs to be tweaked a little more, it seems to be off.

Chan Ken Neth:

lipsync needs some work.

Ken Rice:

This has come along well over the course of your WIPs.

John T. Coomey:

Really nice work man.. I like the way the screen right character starts to pick up speed. the oses there are really nice, I think you just need to make him move even faster...

watch the hand twinning of the blue guy toward the end and also the screen right guy's hand is lost behind him...

Joshua:

great movement! I just wish the characters were a bit more expressive.

Russell:

Nice work! The walk cycles are solid and the stopping is great.

The lip sync is close, but I think that is the weakest part of the piece. Spend a little more time on it to get it perfect, and this will be a great piece.

Lisa Taylor:

I like the contrast in pacing between the two characters. Really nice animation well done

Carlos Fins:

Pretty good. Tan's hits too many gestures on the deal line.

Romain Digonnet:

Very good animation.
I'm not too sure about the "all the more reasons" acting choice though.

Ian:

There are some nice acting moments, but I the sync still needs a bit of work

Taber Dunipace:

Some of the acting and gestures were odd and seemed unnatural but other than that, it looks like everything else is working.

Phillip Johnson:

Other than the lipsync
- Beige guy has some popping joints, it looks like he is way off balance in his walk.

frantz:

needs some more work on the tall guy animation

Mark Kennedy:

Oh no, there is some popping on the knees of the peach dude at the end. What a shame, the walks were great. Nice acting choice by having them walk. haven't seen anyone else do that yet.

Sergey B.:

Great animation ;)
Nice job

Bill:

There is some great work in here--the walk cycles alone are great.
I felt Generi's emotional accent on his first phrase wasn't quite strong enough, and his pose on "murder" seemed ambiguous. On "with what?" Generi's head could be facing a bit more toward camera.
The camera cut, as it is now, doesn't help here. It looks like a "jump cut"--too similar to previous shot--and to me it just seems to come at the wrong time.
The reactions of the characters when NOT speaking are very good--something many other entries overlooked.

Ken Vass:

weight seems weird on characters walk

Winnie . S:

The walking of the short guy and his actions blend well together, very nice! I like him around 73, when he slows down a bit. The last pose of the tall guy, his hand looks chopped off. You can move the hand so that his silhouette is more appealing.

Alonso Soriano:

love that they have different walks that don't sync up, and how you reunited them with Max slowing down. Their reactions to each other talking are too big. Generi is twinning a lot, his last W pose is pretty cliche. Pretty nice work though

Micah Betts:

Excellent and smooth animation, I think some of the acting choses are a bit too exaggerated though. Overall great work.

Jason Smith:

Great use of the audio with the cup. Nice touch!

Paul Vicol:

I like the throwing down of the can!

Adds to the tension!