Ken Rice:

Good effort here - found the screen a bit busy (especially with the large pink character in front). Could do with more variety/dynamics in the poses. Mouth of left character moving too much when saying lines.
Good stuff.

Chan Ken Neth:

cute! and a great idea!

Erik Westlund:

Lip-sync on screen left character is too busy and overworked. Other characters are talking much more believably. Movement is still a little rough or lacking polish, but the structure is there. Hands are placed on the same horizontal line for most poses on all three character. Lines of action mostly vertical with little contrast. Eyebrows should be posed as if along a single, bendable line. Yours often break in the middle between left and right sides.

Jon Houston:

Why 3 people? Only two in clip

M.Bell:

Wow, very nice piece. Using three characters (four + the body) in shot where most people I’ve seen only used too. Good staging and composition, all very clear. Good Animation, Well done!

Ryan Lowe:

heh. dead guy is great. he looks HUGE though.

Jonathan Wondrusch:

The animation is ok, but doesn't really match the line read.

Michel Giguère:

Nice setup, The brown guy could use more variety in his poses. Overall I like it, it is just a little bit too mechanical in movements.

Taber Dunipace:

Nice use of the customizable model shapes. I think the acting choices are good, but it's a little uninteresting because the characters don't directly conflict or do much physically. Also the animation tended to be very quick and staccato throughout, even when it was just a casual line. Strong overall though.

James O'Neill:

I would suggest smoothing out some tangents, it is a bit stiff. But I really like the waddle of the purple character. Some of the lip sync is successful, but some parts are animated too much. I would simplify the mouth shapes.

sean connolly:

the guy in the middle is really funny.

Louis Ng:

Nice setup; it's attractive to the eyes.

I think that the middle moom is moving too much like a robot. . .perhaps the hips need to rotate in favour of the lifted foot when he walks.

Joshua:

the characters lack almost any epression

sharad kumar:

good work!..but the walking doesnt match with the audio.

Helen Cranston:

Nice, but guy on left needs stronger poses.

Romain Digonnet:

Good framing and scenery.
Animation is a little jumpy since it doesn't seem finished yet.
I'm not convinced by the blue guy's walk.
Missing some acting.

Jason Smith:

Does this mean that Moom v1.0 is dead..... noooooooo, say it ain't so.

Great piece.

Kevin:

weird that it's three people talking

Lauren Andersson:

i like your setup

Chelsea Hiatt Farley:

Love the attitudes - each one has his own personality, which is great. Would have been nice to see some stronger poses, switch it up a bit.

sushant:

Jorge Zagatto:

NIce... you got the point in the acting. But it needs a bit more work on the lip sync and polish it a little bit more. But i can imagine you had no time to do that!