Not Again

Final Rating: 3.6. Finished: 76 out of 119 entries.
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Animator: Jon Graef

Description: Two unfortunate pigeons find themselves in another debacle.

Experience: 2yrs as undergrad at BGSU

Time taken: 3 weeks

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Sean Coleman:

Very clever. I like the little hop over the green bird does

Jeffrey Dekker:

sweet

Gregory Marlow:

funny

Mariah:

Cute idea, but not much in the way of animation principles.

Louis Ng:

Ha ha, I like the gag at the end.

Ceno:

u win, very good ideal
congratulations dude

T.Kutschera:

A very funny story! Great!

Taber Dunipace:

Though kind of hard on the eyes, you have some nice gestures going on here and a good clear camera cut. For the future, just keep working on learning to draw so you can get much more performance detail from 2D characters, and study how real things move on film and in real life.

sean connolly:

nice job. i like the idea. the limited movements are very funny and suite the characters well. you might want to think about holding the green guy a little more the first time the purple guy talks.

Srikanth:

very nice story

Russell:

Good concept, but work on your drawing skills. Pay attention to how line and shape define your form. If the characters have form, they take have more volume and will move more realistically. Nice start!

James O'Neill:

It seems a decent work in progress, but I feel more frames would really help strengthen some arcs. I don't feel there is enough motion to offer good character emotion.

Sarah North:

The idea is great

Andrew Linke:

fun concept

David Ruzicka:

funny

Romain Digonnet:

The idea is great, but there's not much animation.
unfortunatly we're ranking the animation

Erik Westlund:

Who knew such little birds could be guilty of so much mayhem. The punchline is funny but the performance is in the close-up. The bird faces seem to have very little range in expression and only make basic poses with their wings. I like the fact that you cut to the wide shot before the last line.

André Moreira Forni:

Lol ! haahhaha very funny hahaha ! The aniamtion is pretty simple, but i like the theme

jeff:

good idea

chloé:

Good idea :D

jonathan fontaine:

funny

Jorge Zagatto:

very clever!! hahaha