Serious drama
Comments:
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Ken Rice:
Not bad - lip sync is a bit off and your characters freeze from time to time, you need moving holds.
Jean-Luc Delhougne:
Acting is not bad, there are some nice subtle moves, but the poses and timing could be more precise.
Erik Westlund:
Lip-sync shapes are not quite working with audio. Movements are either start/stop (hands) or a little mushy (torso screen right character). Eyes wonder too much instead of darting between positions. Same head and neck move performed twice for "with what!" is monotonous and unnatural.
David Walz:
the voices don't seem to fit the bodies well
James O'Neill:
There are some good poses I feel. Though you could probably push them a little further in other places. The staging seems a bit to 3/4 angle, I would go a little more head on, we are nearly looking at the screen right character's back. The lip sync is pretty good, though it feels like the mouths may be opened a bit to much for the volume of the dialogue. Close them a bit, and try to be a bit more subtle, more suggestive with the dialogue, instead of just pushing each syllable.
Russell:
When the red shirt Andy says "With what?" his head bobs twice. He should lift his head to accentuate "with" and push his head down to accentuate "what". Right now, two head bobs is distracting.
The hips and the back seem way too stiff throughout the animation. The core of movement is the torso and hips, so always keep them moving. If you scrub through the animation quickly, you will see several spots where the hips and spine are completely static.
Micah Betts:
Pretty good, characters become completely static sometimes, need to work on your moving holds
Jonathan Mitchell:
timing is a lil bit off but its good..more action please
Phillip Johnson:
Knees pop on the right hand character, hips dont go up and down almost at all and kinda makes them look cemented inplace. Hands on the left character locks in place several times. Good drag and settle and nice work overall. Good lip sync
Pablo Piccione:
ahhh. the red one is a woman?...Extrange...but nice job
Brian Boswell:
The accents seem to hit a few frames too late.









Animator: wei keong
Description: A very serious drama
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 5 days