Sean Coleman:

Try hitting some of your accents a little harder.
Ex. "turn ourselves in now" and "we got bupkiss"

Those poses dont match the intensity of the dialogue

Scott Douglas:

The poses are decent, although the timing to the audio needs work. You are not hitting the audio beats quite right sometimes. For example, the lean forward onto the table would probably work better if it hit on "now".

Michel Giguère:

Good animating. There is a little something in the hand pose when he drops the knife that looks a bit unnatural, other than that, it looks believable to me.

Gregory Marlow:

Looks pretty good. A little floaty in spots and the lip sync is off. But very good effort.

Mariah:

Nice effort, lip sync feels off though.

Taber Dunipace:

A little strange on the acting and poses but the animation is competent and appears smooth.

James O'Neill:

The lip sync feel a bit off. I feel the key syllables are not being spoken, try to simplify the mouth movements to hit only the important syllables.

David Humphreys:

Great sense of weight in this well done :)

red guy is in twinned poses from about frame 70 to frame 170 and there is no breakup of the twinning. maybe you could move the pose on 199 to the one on 170

looking good tho buddy!

JD van der Merwe:

When he say 'turn ourselves in now while we... etc.' the poses seem to be coming in at the wrong times. Slapping the hands on the table would work better on the 'now'. Otherwise it was good.

sean connolly:

great with the performances. it did feel little hoaky when the red guy put his hands on his hips. is there another way you can make him look stern?

Alexis St-Laurent:

Good idea. I like what's shaping in terms of body language. Some details come to view though. It would be cool if the guy to the left hits the table at the time he says "Now!" (around189) instead of earlier. Also, I would take the hand of the guy to the right down earlier so we can see his face the moment he starts talking. And if the red one stayed on the table until the end, it would be good, you could change his attitude just with change in the pose of his shoulders. The white guy could also lean back from the table at the end.

Joshua:

the characters lack the expressions that could really bring them to life.

Sam Caudill:

Someone finally utilized that sound effect in the beginning of the clip! Nice job. Needs some polishing but great start!

RJay Bengelink:

Like the tie in with the knife drop.

Erik Westlund:

Pretty good staging between the characters and how you handle the prop. Good interaction with object. Unfortunately, both characters mirror the last pose with one hand forward towards the other.

Mike York:

Nice Timing and Acting Choices I like it.. I still think in needs some polishing but overall its Good!