Bupkis

Final Rating: 5.22. Finished: 29 out of 119 entries.
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Animator: Winnie . S

Description: Rival rig dead!

Experience: 2 yrs

Time taken: 2 weeks

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Jeffrey Dekker:

I really liked what you did with the Pink character.

Scott Douglas:

Nice stuff, but the first pose on the blue guy is kinda weak.

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Some nice poses in there. Some refining and balancing of the extreme poses and it will be great !

Brandon:

great poses. This read really well for me. Good job.

Mariah:

Nice full body movement.

Virgil Tanasa:

i like the ending, but the other things can definitely be improved.
you need some overlapping motion, you need to settle in a pose, not just get to it and freeze. you lose all sense of weight.

Ryan Lowe:

great timing.

Christopher Salamat:

I think the character on the right is way to nonchalant especially considering what he is saying and his tone. Animation is done well. Around frame 42, where the left character is holding his hands up, his right arm (his right) needs to be polished a bit more, it seems to be frozen in that position.

Brad Bradbury:

yea!! a shot with clear reading gestures distinct personalities and story beats in the right places. great work.

Paul Ramsden:

can tell you use ik arms ..but other than that looks kool :-)

Joseph Leung:

Nice work. But on the word "murder," the facial expression of the pink guy doesn't really match up for me. It feels like the eyebrows shouldn't be raised up.

Traci Plagmann:

Nice job overall. I like the gesture on 'murder' a lot. The hands seem to get into a pose and then stop moving in some places.

James O'Neill:

I would say smooth out some of the transitions from pose to pose, but I like the timing. The background corner, where the two walls meet, is quite distracting.

yoozco:

overall - medicore, but i like last sentence of pink guy :)

Erik Westlund:

Very smooth movement with some very good drag, overlapping action, overshoot, and some settles. You have some nice reversals in their too. Even so, your poses or parts of them such as hands appear to hit a wall as if transformed into cement. IK arms it appears are stationary at the end of the movement and don't settle with the character. Some good acting choices especially in the beginning with one character aloof while the other concerned, but the characters start to move more like one another towards the end. Note: CG character usually don't look believable when posed with arms crossed because demonstrating weight in the arms is so difficult for this pose.

Chris Brock:

great possing and reactions to one another and shot set up....

Micah Betts:

Solid animation here. Overall good, I might have changed the pose for "now" on 197 but it still works as it is.

Taber Dunipace:

The emotions of the pink guy are hard to read during the first half but everything gets better toward the end.

Jonathan Mitchell:

this is good but you should mix in some more broad action...

David Humphreys:

watch for twinning, you have it on two consecutive poses here, the timing is varied a little on the first at fr253 but the second on 276 dosent. other than that its great!

Jason Smith:

Great poses.

Mike York:

nice work

Paul Vicol:

The lip-syncing was really good!
I like the characters too, and how they are opposite colors!