Ken Rice:

Good animation - changing the colours in the scene could help the silhouettes of your characters.

J K:

very spazzy

Scott Douglas:

Good scenario, I like the idea of them as burglars.
I can't see if there is a body on the floor, I'm assuming there is.
The poses are good but the animation seems to be rushed.

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

I like it, the animation is working well, though I find it to be a bit linear. It will be great with a bit more time to refine it !

Maria Chia:

looking good. I think a rendered video would have showcased it better.

Brandon:

I really like this one. The staging, the lock picking :) Excellent!

Virgil Tanasa:

the guy at the door is gesturing so wildly, maybe you could tone that down a little.
a bit more polish here and there, smoothing some things and it could look pretty cool!

Brad Bradbury:

you are really over gesturing in places. like the rolling of the hands in 'cut a deal' and the eyebrows on him after 'deal' it just doesn't read. too many gestures in too short a time.

James O'Neill:

The poses seem pretty good, but there seems to be too many keys set, the characters are twitching a bit. The camera cut seems unnecessary. I would push the eyebrow emotion more.

Patricia Ross:

This is looking good, but I think you could afford to leave out some of the moves. For example, the screen right guy's right hand gesture on 'authorities' and also his little hand circle on 'still cut a deal'. Nice animation though!

Dan Dulberger:

Good, but many moves are too fast.

Joshua:

Nice expressions.

Traci Plagmann:

Overall a nice job. The hand gestures are a little distracting at times.

Phillip Johnson:

Lockpickers hands move really fast and jerky.

Erik Westlund:

Moves are rather sudden and pop from place to place. Gestures are often frenetic or a little hyper. Line of action in poses sometimes tilt but don't bend very much.

sharad kumar:

good..but u need to refine it.

Jason Smith:

Nice composition and great poses!

sean connolly:

i like the idea of the guy picking the lock and all of the gestures he does with the tool. i do think it's a little distracting when the other guy is talking. the first time through i wasn't sure who to look at. also i'm not sure about the hand gesture on "cut a deal" i don't think it fits the dialogue.