Jeffrey Dekker:

Zainab Siddiqui:

I love the movements on the guy sitting. Its perfect!

Scott Douglas:

Feels stiff, very pose-to-pose.

Michel Giguère:

Nice work. They are believable, the last guy standing up at the end looks very good. A couple movements look a bit slow in the transitions.

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Pretty nice animation. Maybe the two bendings on the table are a bit repetitive. But the animation is nice and pretty realistic, it works great ;)

Mike DeGar:

I liked how he almost slapped the guy.

Virgil Tanasa:

looks very nice, i would try having the left guy in a different posture at the end, still somehow surprised, but in a much stronger pose than now. the right guy is working really well, good job!

Taber Dunipace:

Generally pretty well done. Need better facial expressions and body language to understand what each character is thinking and feeling.

Russell:

The arm and finger detail is wonderful!

The character on the left has a pose that could be exaggerated a little more as the animation progresses. Maybe have him rest on the table and slowly move in closer to the other character to emphasize the point. Small stuff, though.

Nice job!

Louis Ng:

Nice execution of the animation. Generally believable acting (though I wonder why the guy at table keeps looking at the box).

It will also be nice if the standing guy spreads his fingers out more instead of all pointing front. It will make them look more natural.

Romain Digonnet:

Very good animation.
Subtle and yet in the mood of the audio clip.
The mouth animation could be improved.

barak drori:

very good.

Erik Westlund:

Nice simple shot puts the focus on the acting. Rhythm in the poses and intensity of movement are hitting many of the right notes found in the audio, although the last move is a little big. Heads should tilt a little on some of the poses. Eyes and eyebrows are symmetrical between left and right sides of the face.

Virgil Mihailescu:

pretty good, but the last gesture is somehow off, maybe too much... I don't think it matches the intensity

chloé:

I like the fingers on the right... Good detail !

Ken Vass:

great work! so refreshing to finally see some real acting...lip synch seems a bit weird in a few places however, but overall one of the best ive seen yet...in a subtle kind of way

Lianna Scrimger:

nice! I think when he says cut a deal, on 'deal' you could open up the hand for a slightly stronger pose. Personal taste only though. 8* from me!

James O'Neill:

I would like to see a little more overlap.

Pete Shand:

Very nice, great acting, great poses. Maybe just look at when he comes down on the table, could be pushed a bit