Shawn Savage:

I like it, mouth seems a little off, but great job

Pablo Smith:

Very nice! The timing and spacing are very good. It might help to vary up the acting a little more.

Sandy Sze:

Good stuff, timing is good. However there r too many poses, all the acting is from one big pose to another big pose, sometimes less is more, try to use some small poses as anticipation of those big poses so big poses stand out ^_^

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

It's moving really well, but I feel too much the pose to pose actions.

Mariah:

Smooth movements, but looks a little like they're just moving from one pose to another.

Joseph Leung:

The characters movement seems a bit awkward to me. It feels a bit unnatural because it is so evenly timed.

Andy Wakeley:

Definitely nice, great mechanics and lipsync! Some of the posing choices I think could be reworked, especially towards the end when they both have pretty much the same pose, really good work though!

teo chee wei:

last pose for the 2 character is too similer , i think i will be better if def

wei keong:

the hand on the head looks like an awkward pose he would do.

Virgil Tanasa:

at the end they are both in the same pose (almost). the lipsync is not really ok and another thing i notice is that when not in focus, the characters look (almost) frozen. you do want us to focus on the other one, true, but it doesnt have to make the other one look "dead" :) "with what" gesture doesn't seem to be the best choice, in my oppinion, looks like he's trying to think instead of being more interogative (hope that makes sense...)

Ken Rice:

pretty good - however gestures seem to be hitting every beat - needs to be broken up a bit.

Taber Dunipace:

Why are they almost perfect mirrors of each other? First guy puts something down with right hand, second guy puts something down with right hand. First guy lays his palms face up on the table, second guy lays his palms face up on the table.

The quality of the animation is pretty high overall but those weird points of mimicry pull the piece down unfortunately.

Russell:

I like the body motions, but the mouth shapes are way to poppy.

Watch out for composition. Check frame 169 and you will see the antennae of that phone is going into the red shirt Alfred's mouth.

Erik Westlund:

Nice lighting but the frame appears to be rendered as something other than 4x3 ratio (off topic). Your animation is nice and smooth without having a spline-y appearance. Good moving holds that don't float. Both characters are animated as if they are the same person. Body language, even poses is virtually identical for both. Frame 100. Both are primarily using their right hand (good to have chosen a hand dominance) but the actions with that hand are the same for both characters. Perhaps the skeptical character (screen left/red) could have be turned away from his counter part somewhat to break up this tendency for sameness.

Ezra Allen:

less poses and more variation would help I think, there are a lot of similar motions coming from both characters. Think about what motion would be needed to break your even rythum in this scene, and where you could have gone with a more subtle gesture too emphasies the points you want the audience to focus on.

The animation is nice and flowing Im just not sure about the acting choices.

Carlos Fins:

Very pose to pose, and some of the poses don't fit right with the dialogue. Good overall polish, though.

sean connolly:

great timing and animation on a technical level. i think the poses feel too obvious and unatural. maybe you just have too many in there.

Romain Digonnet:

Nice animation.
One remark would be that the lipsinc is off in the middle of the piece.

Chris Niewinski:

Nice work. It's a shame the video proportions are messed up.

Freddy Burgos:

Nice job! Watch the phone antenna and the screen-left guy's face, it distracts a bit. Keep it up!

Phillip Johnson:

You need to vary the speeds of his movements, they all seem to go at the same speed right now. Good work overall though.

André Moreira Forni:

hahahah it is great ! I like it a lot ! I am not a big fan of pose at 250. And i dont know why he picks up the phone and put it on the table, i would probably animate it with the phone in his hand !

well done !

Ken Vass:

good staging but lip synch needs alot of work

chloé:

A lot of symmetry. It is a bit disconcerting.

sushant:

both the guys... remains totally static, when not delivering the speech...doesn't look natural.
need to work more on subtlety part...

sharad kumar:

good..but the hand gestures are very common...u shudve made it more stronger..