Scott Douglas:

The animation seems, for lack of a better term, "wobbly". The poses don't seem clear enough at any one time (I hope that made sense).

Gregory Marlow:

Looks pretty good. A little floaty in spots and the lip sync is off. But very good effort.

Mike DeGar:

charactert animation s were good, but the lipsynch seemed off, maybe it was the way the facial rig is set u but the mouth seemed. .abnormal. Other then that its great :)

Mariah:

I don't feel like that extra time you took at the beginning helps anything.

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

I think it would be nice to make them move on their chair more than just bending their back, to have more variations in the acting ;)

David Walz:

a good use of facial expression

Joseph Leung:

I feel the body language could have been stronger when the voices got stronger and louder.

Ryan Lowe:

the lip sync is weird. good acting though. subtle.

Ken Rice:

pretty good animation but I don't feel the characters are connecting with each other - something to do with the eyes I think.

E. Cooman:

Could do a bit more on the details, more body movement.
But still a great animation!

Russell:

The hands seemed glued down. Ik hands still move and shift a little, showing friction.

Also, the beginning pose of the left side character makes him seem dead, not bored. He is completely still and doesn't react to his companions statement until the last moment.

The lip sync is way too similar on both characters. Attitude affects how one uses the mouth. The mouth shapes are also exaggerated the point of distraction. Exaggerate the body movements if you want an exaggerated mouth.

James O'Neill:

Some poses are good, but the movement overall seems a bit slow. The movement seems to swim a bit between poses. I want these transitions to be faster, making snappier animation. There are some great facial expressions, but they need to hold a bit longer to read well.

Marco Palmieri:

need to make eye contact between the two guys.

Adrian Baluta:

The animation of the eyes is missing,also the acting is very poor and without a good timing.

Lisa Taylor:

Some really nice natural animation. The only thing I would say is that it lacks a bit of contrast in your timing and poses. But really great work, well done!

Mathias AUBRY:

nice animation but it lacks some strong poses.

Sergey B.:

Good job

Jon Graef:

I feel that everything is just too symmetrical. Possibly move the camera so that we're looking at the scene from a slight angle.

Romain Digonnet:

Too much frowning on their mouth.
Otherwise nice overal animation

Phillip Johnson:

- Corners of the mouths on the lipsync is dragged down way too far.
- Left hand guy should blink or something at the beginning looks dead.

Taber Dunipace:

The timing could use improvement, it feels monotonous right now.

Erik Westlund:

Charcoal gray set really focuses attention on characters. Arrangement of props has some realism but bird in front is distracting from characters. (all prior comments are OT). Screen right character's left hand seems to be glued in place. Reactions of screen left character are working, but the intensity of action/pose on "bupkis!" is less than audio. Likewise the intensity of screen left character is much lower than the audio indicates, especially two poses on "...NOW while we can still cut a DEAL!". Just not enough energy in his performance overall.

jonas bech:

love the ligthing

miles southan:

Really nice work! I like your acting choices a lot. The lip synch needs a lot of work though. Also, you need to cheat their faces more toward camera and watch out for that weird sillhouette overlap on the hand at the end.

Brian Boswell:

Weird palsied mouth shapes. Their emotions seem to change without reason. The story is not clear. They are at a restaurant, holding the check maybe?

sushant:

time lag before the first speech is on the higher side....can be shortened. At start the guy on the left is totally static..infuse some life into it....need to work on the posing... and the energy release ...