office problems

Final Rating: 3.95. Finished: 66 out of 119 entries.
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Animator: Shawn Savage

Description: two men arguing in a conference room

Experience: year and half of college

Time taken: 1 week

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Jeffrey Dekker:

Really floaty through out the whole clip.

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Not bad, but the moves are floating, the poses could be stronger, and the facial animation is hard to read...

Gregory Marlow:

a little floaty

Erik Westlund:

Standing up to emphasize point being made is more of an intense change than the audio seems to support. Left hand of screen left character floats around and through table edge. Facial animation lacks the amount of energy found in audio.

Ryan Lowe:

FLOATY. timings off.

Joseph Leung:

You should have stronger body language and facial expressions when the voices get stronger and louder.

Andy Cunial:

Try not to end the scene in the middle of the action.

Christopher Salamat:

Seems a bit floaty. Camera should be pushed in a bit closer so we can focus on the characters more.

Virgil Tanasa:

too floaty. between poses, their hands always seem to slide. try getting more accents in, and hold some poses you feel that are strong enough to deliver your ideas.

Ken Rice:

pretty good - the set is a bit busy I think - you lose the characters slightly. Bit foaty too.

Taber Dunipace:

The motion is very soft and floaty. Try to work on your timing and inbetweens.

Paul Ramsden:

little bit floaty... but kool acting ideas

Adam Shaw:

It feels like the animation is very floaty, and some of the movements could be sped up abit.

Dan Dulberger:

they move to slow compared to the stressed voiced in the audio.

Russell:

The movements are really sluggish. Pop into poses with overlap and you will have a much more animated animation.

sharad kumar:

poses are okay..but animation is floating...

Romain Digonnet:

A little floaty, but pretty nice.

chloé:

It's very slowly. Like in water... But the keys looks OK.
(Sorry for my English)

pep:

Silver character 's left hand was shifting, when he said "great"