sean connolly:

The acting choices overall are pretty good. i believe that gray guy is thinking pretty hard about this situation. the lipsync looks a bit floaty. maybe put a few more mouth positions in there. also the timing on some of the slower movements look a little too even.

Jonathan Wondrusch:

I like the fact that you've got two characters that feel involved. The acting choices are ok, but the implementation could be better. Use a moving hold when you have to, and don't keep everything moving ALL the time.

Jon Houston:

A little stiff

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

What bugs me here is that the characters do not always move with the audio line they say.. The animation is not bad overall, but needs more work.

Ryan Lowe:

reference yourself next time. it will provide better acting choices.

John T. Coomey:

Watch the guy screen left.. He feels like he is glued to the ground.. maybe a few foot shuffles wil get rid of that.. good job

Erik Westlund:

Funny lumpy characters. Some poses are clear but many are not. Arms and hands are getting lost in silhouette of characters on some moves such as "...we are accessories to espionage and murder." Anticipation on frame 90 is lost, pose on 95 "accessories" is lost in the big settle that follows, anticipation on "and" is very small compared to action and pose on "murder" lacks energy and clarity because big move is with left hand that is almost completely inside silhouette of pose. Lots of little movements through out make actions and acting harder to read. Hand blocking phone is not easy to understand. Character design is presenting challenges to good posing and movement that haven't been met. Lip-sync timing is off and glosses over some parts of the dialog.

David Andrade:

f77 The Oh Yeah part, it feels like you arent hitting the shapes and youre off. MURDERR Mmm, work on the MM and the Err, faster lip movement there or at least snap the jaw a bit earlier. Interesting acting but it's not showing me a lot of their character, in fact they feel rather similar

Russell:

The poses are confusing. If the sound is muted, I can't tell what the characters are doing or feeling. Also, the lip sync needs a lot of work.

Taber Dunipace:

Need better facial expressions and body language to understand what each character is thinking and feeling.

barak drori:

beautiful characters, and hard a bit to animate I would say. if I could comment, I would like to say that there is a bit off sync action on the part of the character in gray in the begining, and the blue guy's legs are glud to the floor a bit. good luck!

Mike York:

"With What" the lip sync seems to be off a tad..