Trouble on the Farm
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Kent Wong:
The timing is good. I like the interesting lips sync style. Both shows contrasting characteristics. Thats great.
Joseph Leung:
If that's human feet, what the heck are those blobs supposed to be? I like your character's emphasis on the word "murder," but then the other character should have an even stronger build up to the word "now." Lip sync is decent.
Lindsay Thompson:
That was cute...
J K:
cool
Jean-Luc Delhougne:
I like the cam angle, the lip synch and expressions are cool, but the rest isn't animated...ie: feet are not well posed, weight balance is not there...Feet and hips do not moved at all..
Chan Ken Neth:
it looks great! u manage to pull off some pretty good character acting even without hand, but it would help more if there are more hips movement on the character to the right.
Ken Rice:
Some nice facial animation - shame you didn't show more expression via moving your characters around. Not sure if the slow camera zoom works: it distracted me as I thought the foot was moving.
Ok so I just noticed that the foot does indeed move - maybe if you eliminate the slow zoom the foot movement would be more noticable.
Daniel Harris:
Great! Love the squashy stretchyness with the facial stuff! You've got some great facial motion on the one on the left, shame the one on the right is so much softer. Especially on "Deal".
Love the toe twitch too, nice work ;-)
Matt Garward:
Great fun expressive faces. My only problem is during the third line ("All the more reason...") the guy on the left is still TOO poppy and expressive, and I end up watching him instead of the speaker. Some fun stuff though!
Mariah:
Love the facial emotions!!
Victor Wong:
Maintaining eye contact is going to be important in this scene, to make it more than just two talking heads.
David Walz:
it's orginal
Ryan Lowe:
sync is off. understandable without a tounge in some frames, where its needed. facial expressions are awesome. 7
Ceno:
heheheh
Michel Giguère:
Funny, with strong facial animation and good lipsync. It just needs a little more"body" movement sideways, I don't know how, maybe use the legs more.
Again, nice face expressions.
Howard:
they're so cute...i like the stretch and squash...the facial expression is well done too! good work!
Joe Garhan:
I really like this with some more motion, maybe they could take a few steps it would be really nice.
Dan Dulberger:
Nice rich eye animation.
James O'Neill:
Some of the poses seem to contradict one another. Simplify the characters emotions.
yoozco:
nice char's :) good squash and stretch. i like "nervous" moves. no crits.
Kristoffer Drageset:
Lovely facial animation! The best face acting this month in my opinion. Next time, give us some bodies too :)
Ezra Allen:
What the hell are they??
Nice work, I guess it must have been fun to focus in more on just the facial animation.
.....has he been murdered by his own.....you ...know ...erm...fluffy ball things?????
well the right erm...hary ball thing seems a bit off on his lip of authorites. "oh yeah" is wroking well.
Ali Tezel:
Love the guy on the right. :)
Romain Digonnet:
nice facial animation (left one better than right).
I like the blinking before changing emotion on the left guy when he sees the dead guy move.
Christopher Salamat:
left character is animated very well. mouth shapes on the right character seem to be a little to subtle. you should probably add more frame in-between the left chracter's reaction changes when he's listening because right now they seem to pop from one to another.
Erik Westlund:
Another set of weird and interesting characters. Where all these strange rigs coming from? Everything relies on the face in this one, since that all these characters are, faces. Mouths don't have enough punch of energy in the movement but seem to move between poses very softly. Exceptions are on "murder" and "bupkis". Screen right character moves in a somewhat mushy manner.
Gill Frank:
Like the left guy on the screen good lipsing but the Right guy is abit num if u know what i meen.
Ken Vass:
great eye acting
Micah Betts:
Good job working with characters without arms :) Lip syncing is great for most of the time, just to nitpick the tongue movement could be better.









Animator: dan alvarez
Description: I'm late uploading!!!!!
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 5 evenings this past week