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Final Rating: 5.17. Finished: 31 out of 119 entries.
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Animator: Alejandro

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Experience: 11 months

Time taken: 2 weeks - part time -

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Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Surely a bit overacted, lots of hand gestures and nearly parodic poses. But thoses poses are really cool and overall the animation is working quite well.

Brandon:

Great poses, Terrific interaction :)

Ryan Lowe:

point. point. point. point.

Mariah:

I like the fluidity and emotion!

Ceno:

i like the moves man!
and the colors

Brad Bradbury:

theres a lot of pointing going on. try to think of hand gestures that don't involve pointing.

Virgil Tanasa:

nice one, but i don't really like the ending. i would rather had the right guy still holding the other one from his shirt, to make it look more powerful, and a stronger pose.
but overall, pretty nice, i like the beggining!
when the left guy takes a step towards the table, it looks very unnatural when he's stopping with his legs "crossed"

sean connolly:

nice contrast in characters. however i did feel that both characters pointed a lot. you might want to have the one use that gesture more than the other.

Michael Vandenhoven:

Great effort, but for me, the animation didn't match the voices.

Russell:

This is nice work! I think the lip shapes (PMB) that are closed could be pushed a frame or two longer.

It has a soap opera aesthetic, and I can dig it.

Lisa Taylor:

Really great work on the body. You need to work on the lip sync though, it really lets it down. Plus Im not too sure whats going on at the end, is he dead too?

Phillip Johnson:

- Lipsync needs alot of work, its very mushy.
- Needs weight on the grab, also the dark haired one has an odd bend to his spine.

Erik Westlund:

Starts on an intimate moment. Ends on a big struggle that knocks one character out for reasons I can determine. First 52 frames are great, the rest are overacted with giant moves that don't fit the dialog. Too much reliance on pointing finger for your acting choices. Go back an look at the first 52 frames... you have something worth noting there.

Helen Cranston:

I really liked the very start of this, before the soundtrack starts. Very nice

Jonathan Paquin:

Go easy with the "one finger pointing". It comes up often in your animation in places where other gestures or holds could have been used.

Mike York:

I like your lighting and render as well as what you did with LowMax but I think your poses don't really fit the audio to well and it just doesnt seem to work

padraig post:

The grab got lost a bit in the cut I think. Had to watch it twice to get what happened.
Still liked it though!

Elisa:

the movements looks nice
but for a final reaction I think it would be better if he didn't let go of the guy and look more irritated.
but besides that, looks nice

James O'Neill:

Some poses are contradictory to others, I would try to decide on what your characters are like and stick to that personality.

Senthilnathan D:

nice..