Koty Juliano:

lip sync troubles.

sean connolly:

nice job. the faces are very lively. the bigger guy's lipsync gets off near the end. it looks a little too earlier for the audio.

Gregory Marlow:

I think the audio is off a little.

Mike DeGar:

HA! I like the payoff at the end. good job. Umm when the guy in the chair talks for the first time, its kindof hard to pay attention to him when the guy standing up is moving around a lot. Other then that good job :)

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Hehe, funny size comparison ;)

Overall it's pretty good, but it would be great with some added subtleties...

Mariah:

Lip sync feels off.

Joseph Leung:

Lip sync looked very awkward...

Ceno:

cool guys

Andy Cunial:

The staging works really well for this scene. Really builds up to the ending. Great job!

Taber Dunipace:

Really jerky. Seems like it's still in blocking to some degree. Try to slow down those sudden starts and stops and make this more smooth. Acting choices seem fine, it's just too fast.

James O'Neill:

The lip sync is good for the first half, but then is too exaggerated toward the end. Also the camera move at the end totally takes me out of the scene. I would leave the camera where it is.

John T. Coomey:

Good job.. this looks pretty good.. Im not sure about the composition of the last shot though.. also watch all the twined poses.. Twined poses are not your friend. Well very rarely

Ken Rice:

Not sure if the scale thing is working or not - good stuff

Leon Gittens:

the dialogue seems a little of in places, nice lay out

Russell:

The lip sync seems a little off on the second half of the piece.

Also, the ending shot is interesting, but I don't quite understand it. The scale took me out of the story a little.

Victor Wong:

I'm not sure the idea of playing with perspective was a good one.

sharad kumar:

good poses!..but u need to give cusion in to your animation ..things are stopping suddenly here

Erik Westlund:

Interesting choice in staging. Produces some nice separation between characters as having different attitudes. "Little" boss looks more like a goofy dope than an authority figure with a complex (don't mix your insults, it waters them down). You have some energy in this but the limited animation (start stop, start stop) is robbing the performance.

Lisa Taylor:

Some of it seems a little too snappy especially towards the end. But theres some really nice stuff in there though so well done.

Romain Digonnet:

Good animation.
The lipsinc is off on the "all the more reason...cut a deal" part.
good camera work.

Jon Graef:

I really like the pose on the character in the chair when he delivers his last line, and I almost want to see it exaggerated a little more. Nice work.

Avner Engel:

COOOL! I like the tension you have got going, well done.

Ken Vass:

great work man, nice staging in my opinion....lip synch needs polishing however

padraig post:

Not bad but the cut threw me off a little bit.