J K:

Very cool

Koty Juliano:

this is good. if your going to have a great background, I think you should keep in consistent in showing it. there is a little to much there.

James Wilson:

great drawings and nice animaiton. i was a bit lost at the begining for where to look. well done

Pablo Smith:

the drawings are great and the animation is smooth. The only comment I have is the environment and the characters look exactly the same. It might be easier to focus on the animation if there was a slight difference at this stage.

Jeffrey Dekker:

That was awesome.

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Isn't there too much wait at the beginning? I thought it was 2 seconds max. Well, not a problem for me ;)

Animation is pretty cool, even if a bit hard to read on the closeups.. Poses and timing are really good ;)

Gregory Marlow:

funny.

Ryan Lowe:

HAHAHHAAH. who ya gonna call!
lol. amazing timing.

dan alvarez:

Tough to critique this one. Very strong piece.
Good job!!

Mike DeGar:

what was the guy on the left doing before the audio started? not sure if thats necessary. But everything else looks great!

Daniel Huertas:

I liked it! :D but i didn't get the beggining though... the anticipation of what he was gonna say didn't match with the acting.. but the rest was very good! :D

Brad Bradbury:

scary dude. but well drawn.

Virgil Tanasa:

the final camera cut comes very unexpected, i don't know if it was really necessary.
i kind of like the start of it with the indecision of the left character, but it looks a bit unfinished...

Michel Giguère:

Very nice drawings. I really like your facial animations.It looks a little odd to have such a busy set disappear and reappear when characters speak, but that might not be important for that contest.

John T. Coomey:

wow.. Great work.. Really great work or am I just impressed by the 2D.. Nah.. good job

Taber Dunipace:

Nice control over these complex characters. Good acting choices generally and the animation quality is pleasing. I don't like the cut back at the end to the first shot for some reason. It didn't really seem to help the scene and was distracting. Also the two attempts to talk at the very begging were hard to understand. Very strong overall. It's obvious you know what you're doing.

Adam Clark:

I like this piece. Nice depth to the drawings, and the acting is clear for the most part. Im not sure about the early actions by the character in the background. That is the only part that was a little unclear to me. I like the action and reaction to "with what!"

Erik Westlund:

Loooonnng intro sequence seems like a diversion and a distraction from the performance. Great fidelity to details on characters. You have a lot to keep track of there. Poses on "oh yeah, great." are too static; relies on face too much. Interesting choices in staging and the dialog/debate revs up. The dynamic, primarily diagonal nature of the two shots in the middle falls flat on the final shot. By comparison the original, primarily horizontal layout is static when the shots in the middle are anything but.

So, the ghost busters went a little too far, eh? Funny.

Russell:

I like the detail put into the piece. The small idiosyncratic movements really help with the attitude and personality.

I think the camera cut is too quick to help show the motions. Maybe staging the characters closer in frame would eliminate the need for a camera cut entirely.

The extra time at the start seems unnecessary.

lizzie:

nice animation.

Jeremie Rosner:

really good work in timing an great poses!!
I loved the way your left character hesitates to say his line...
even if he is a bit far from camera. (maybe you should have left away the apple rollin' to make a closer shot on him).

Romain Digonnet:

Nice idea and great animation :D

Joan Delmont:

Very funny ! amazing work !

Lauren Andersson:

WONDERFULLLLL!

Jonathan Mitchell:

very well drawn

Chelsea Hiatt Farley:

Love the concept. The false starts at the beginning are great, but maybe a little rough leading into when he actually starts talking.

Mike York:

Wow! Nice work I like this a lot

Ken Vass:

im not much of a traditional animator but the animation looks great

Matt Tomlinson:

costumed birthday party...gone wrong. great job! love to see this colored.

Lianna Scrimger:

beauty! the pause at the beginning was a good move, it gave it some nice timing.

kEViN:

AWSOME!
lol

barak drori:

just go to Disney, man. b-e-a-utiful!

sharad kumar:

when he says we got bupkis..u cudve show sum reaction in the other character....good work,keep it up!