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Animator: Sasa Rodrz

Description: Two friends trying to build up a lab

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Leonardo Pereira:

Good poses and idea. But you need to polish more your arcs and your tangents in the graph editor. Needs a lot of work.

Brian Rusnak:

Nice work! I like the first character's interaction with the "rolled-up" plans. I think the characters' expressions work well too.

I would add a few inbetweens to some of the motions that appear a bit snappy (the finger-wag at the end).

Nice work!

Gull:

Good effort...lip sync need work...left character's acting a bit samey...needs more variety I feel.

Steve Hawthorne:

Starting to block in some nice ideas, with some chemistry. The posing could be pushed, while the animation feels very spliney. Working on your spacing may help, less keys between posing allows you to focus on the key poses.

Alan Leppen:

Needs work on the Lighting

Elisabeth Janerka:

nice

Eddie Higgenbottom:

not there.