Final Rating: 5.77. Finished 17 out of 70 entries.

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Animator: Ahmad Habash

Description: The master discovers the apprentice lab!

Experience: Lots

Time taken: 40 hours

Comments:

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Brian Rusnak:

Nice work, I like the fluidity of the animation, especially the ghost character and the 2nd character when he tosses his papers in frustration.

The expressions are working well, but I would adjust the timing of the ghost character's expressions slightly on the first shot. Add some more motion to the eye brows on the dialogue's high points "woah, check, and crime lab". Currently he holds the same expression throughout the phrase.

Nice work though, keep going. Would love to see more of this fluid-type hand drawn work in the future.

Paraskevi Koutalou:

I like the style!

Jake Lee:

I appreciate the hand drawn quality! Keep it up!

ro crown:

cute the way the first speaker turns into a ghost or has ghost like wizard powers.

Elisabeth Janerka:

Fun setup!

Eddie Higgenbottom:

Good reactions. voice 2 is good but it's not enough info to stay on model like the hands. He don't want to be a sidekick. The hands and arm don't read.