Comments:
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Amanda Davis:
lmao
Karl Pontau:
Characters don't sound drunk. Some of the movements are unclear.
Clara Myers:
Crazy fun movement, but give the audience one movement to focus on! They both move a lot, and that creates a competition for the viewer's attention.
Jasmine Keith:
Too many poses and too floaty. Try filming yourself acting out the dialogue before animating next time and I think you could improve a lot. I see potential in this.
Tari Mack:
When both characters are moving all the time like this, and at a pretty consistent rate, the animation feels floaty like they're underwater or in space. Drunk people do move around a lot, but you have to learn when to hold and when to move; when the red man face plants at 168, he's still moving his fingers and he's right back up so quickly. He should stay down for the rest of the time I think. 114 - 180, where the red man is Anticipating his fall, is nice. 126 - 198 the green man's right hand is in the air unnaturally not really doing anything.
Animator: Sebastian Alandro Fernandez Vasquez
Description: This animation is about two friends talking and drinking in the bar.But one friend is slightly more drunk than the other.
Experience: 3 years study "Digital Animation"
Time taken: one week