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DECEMBER COMPETITION 2016

by amol

Final Rating: 4.21. Finished 69 out of 118 entries.

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Animator: amol

Description: father and son conversation

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 8 days

Comments:

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Lauren McKinley:

The animation in this is pretty good, but if the actions were more emphasised or exaggerated it would be a lot more interesting. : )

Karl Pontau:

characters seem stiff.

Clara Myers:

More exaggeration in the characters' expressions would help this a lot!

Christoph Lendenfeld:

i like the swiping hand movement at frame 200, but holding the index finger like at frame 250 is soooo cliche and doesn't really fit the scene imo

Sthefany Briceño:

Nice work need to make more expression on the faces