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The office has to say the secret

by 袁晓

Final Rating: 3.23. Finished 101 out of 118 entries.

344 views including the voting period.

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Animator: 袁晓

Description: The office has to say the secret

Experience: 6Month

Time taken: 1month

Comments:

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Gerben Brandsma:

Make movements flow into one another and use slow-in, slow-out. They move like robots now.

Clara Myers:

The speed of the movements felt a bit uniform. Try playing around with that.

Jasmine Keith:

It looks a bit like you haven't made it very far past the blocking stage. You've got a lot of problems with jumping AND floating so try working on your arcs a bit more. If you need help with timing, try filming yourself.