Michael Launder:

the good thing about this months audio is there are a lot of "o" shapes in the dialogue! make an "ooo" sound with your mouth and see how more mouth shapes are affected by that! your characters mouth rarely narrows!

Poornachander Adepu:

you should need so much hard work!

Bryan Stone:

Okay. Needs more work.

Dominic Rayner:

Facial animation only, need the rest of the body to move or gesture to help deliver the lines.