Deven Ramesh Bhosale:

nice work..
please try to act in font of mirror i copy that you will get the best results..

Enrico Westley:

I like what's happening! Maybe push those poses and the actions that are taking place. Add more detail to everything and it'll come alive!

J.K. Riki:

The orange eyes are cool, but honestly they were a wee bit distracting. I couldn't focus on anything else, ha ha. You might tone them back a bit, just to keep things a little less distracting. Keep at it!