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11 Second Club December 2014

by Josh O Caoimh

Final Rating: 2.60. Finished 152 out of 173 entries.

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Animator: Josh O Caoimh

Description: Rushed entry for the December 2014 11 Second Club

Experience: Not Much

Time taken: 2 Days

Comments:

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Alex Sepel:

Love the world, but keep on working on your animation skills :) online tutorials will help a lot, good luck!

Adam Sirrelle:

I think the camera is a too far away from the action and too much on their backs.
If the man was in the foreground, so you could see the syringe close up, and the woman was facing from more I think that'd make a better shot.

Enrico Westley:

Very floaty, I also feel as though you should go back to the planning stage and re-think the performance :(

Sarah Johnson:

It would be nice if the characters were facing the camera so we could see their expressions!