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Animator: Rodrigo Perrotte

Description: 3D animation, or almost!

Experience: 2 months

Time taken: 20 days

Comments:

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Tobias Egeli:

who is she speaking to? why is she pointing where she is pointing.
I think it not only important to animate good but also to tell a good and convncing story that easy to read.
the animatons where altso a bit stiff and there where no feeling of waight, not flooty but more robotic
good luck and keep on producing:)

Amartya Mukherji:

Not a good use of Mery rig. The arcs are not proper. flow is missing. Timing also is off. Needs a lot of improvement. but nice try. :)

Sarah Johnson:

Nice secondary animation of her hand on her neck during the pause. Try to smooth the motion out more in the graph editor!