Final Rating: 4.68. Finished 53 out of 173 entries.

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Animator: Rajesh Kalyadappu

Description: i am very excited , this is my first entry in 11 second club

Experience: Fresher

Time taken: 6 days

Comments:

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Eddie Higgenbottom:

bad lip snyc

Elizabeth Harding:

his glasses look like they are floating above his nose, it's a little distracting. also not sure if what you are doing with her eyes is on purpose but it looks slightly odd, try giving her something to focus on, right now they remind me of a fish swimming in a fishbowl.

Deven Ramesh Bhosale:

her eyes are goes off rest is fine...

Amartya Mukherji:

Wow.. very well done. There are plenty of emotions in your animation as was in the dialogue. The characters are also awesome. I felt there are few small issues. For example, the eye brow is off when she says "tell him" for the first time.

The hand pointing at the man gets locked with the body still moving.

"settle down" lip sync is not proper.

Before the guy walked upto her, it seems like, - there are only two keys, and the guy floats in-between.

the guy's grip on the girl's shoulder is oscillating. The Parent constrain is not proper may be.

The guys specs are not resting on his nose. You should have placed it properly before parenting it.

Now I'm being too critical. Anyways keep up the good work. Cheers :)

Aaron McGriff:

Which rigs are these? Are these your own personal rigs? I like them.