Daniel Huertas:

I think you needed to add some close ups to see the reactions or the thinking of the character while acting.. it's hard to see with this stagging...

Hernán Bruna:

It's good... i think it would be great if she stand up from ther chair and leaves hehe.

Sergey B.:

Nice work! Funny animation

Ken Rice:

Nicely done but I feel your animation could do with more life.

Tyson Ibele:

The sillhouettes on your poses work well, but the motions are fluid enough nor exaggerated enough.

lizbeth:

You could probably move the camera in a bit so we could read their facial reactions more. The animation is pretty stiff....some of the key poses you have, you're only moving the arms and not the rest of his body. It would help to move his hips lower as he leans in.

Aaron Clement:

Great imagination with this! Maybe a little more emotion in there would be nice... good job, though.

Emmanuel Vergne:

nice beginning when he offers the cake but i don't like the way he stops
i know it's not the most important but le lipsync is not clearly readable.

Frank G:

I wonder if that right knee should contact the ground to support his posture? But then I guess it may suggest he's proposing rather than presenting. Nice cake plop at the end.

Chris Sacco:

I'd have her turn the cake in the air more as she says the last line. Make her examining it there also instead of just holding it.

Taber Dunipace:

The motion is very soft and floaty, a hallmark of incomplete CG animation. Try to work on your timing and inbetweens.

Mason Saucier:

I like his face towards the end there, but the only thing that really bugs me is the lack of full curves. Maybe if you added an extra key frame within that first move to make it more bezier, but I love it keep up the good work!

Tim Nowak:

i like how thoughful he is to give her an old fruitcake

Erik Westlund:

Characters do not have to face each other directly when being staged for this kind of dialog. Having both characters in profile removes a lot of facial and upper-body information. The fruitcake prop has me a little confused, but that's not the primary issue. As she says, "Remarkably like.... " you have a nice setup in his reaction to shift from excitement to frustration. She seems mechanical at the very end of the sequence.

Mat Brady:

The anim is great! The models need an improvement, but the anim is all there. Good stuff!

sharad kumar:

she needs to hit some accents in the dialogue...not just plainly go on speaking.

arunprasad:

good work

Nawaz:

nice facial...nice xpression change towards the end...

Max Herzfeld:

Good basis, i realy like the subtulties to the mans facial expression however the woman's were abit slow, her smile didn't leave until long after she seemed to act unhappy. Also the man's legs are fixed in space but not set down. This would appear much more natural if you planted his knee to the ground. You, also, could have used more dramatic choices with the woman and the "cherry/ apple" she could have thrown it at his head, put it on his nose like a clown, or when she droped it on the cake it could have shattered with age. Nice start though keep working on the holific details.

HARISH:

the male body is looks very static. u could have some moving holds to make it look better . also the females shoulders dont have any movement either. Males actions are linear .

Imus zai:

excellent!

dard:

I would rethink the staging of the scene. It would be nice to see either character's face at a 3/4 view as they are talking.