Escelce-December entry
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Daniel Huertas:
the pops in the knees are a little distracting for me in the jump.. and the rest of the poses of the guy looks a little floaty.. tight your moving holds up and i think you will have a nice shot.. i like the acting choices for the old lady though.
luc:
Very nice. Only issue for me is that I found him too bouncy around at beginning. She looks great.
Emmanuel:
Good work! The animation flows well and the line of actions work here.
Tim Nowak:
How presentable! Nice flow of work. I think we have our second placer.
Steve Clarke:
My entry. I had to choose something as a rating otherwise it keeps asking and seen as i uploaded it i must be quite happy with it:)
Imus zai:
Excellent!
I think that the right hand pose on frame 86 should come abit earlier as he takes off the lid?
Taber Dunipace:
The motion is very soft and floaty, a hallmark of incomplete CG animation. Try to work on your timing and inbetweens.
Erik Westlund:
There is an interesting puppet quality to these two characters, especially the male 'gift giver'. Mrs. Munchnick character is pretty convincing in performance and movement. Male character is a little too exaggerated and knees are bending strangely (frames 24-58). Nice accent on the head of Mrs. M. on frame 269.
sharad kumar:
i think there is too much movement on the male character in the begining....the lady is fine.
HARISH:
i like the guys expressions . check the guys left leg knee ,its and odd break between 18-60 frames ..........rest looks good
Aaron Clement:
I like the old lady. I felt the guy's eyeline was off. He needs to be looking at the lady when speaking. The lighting is a bit over-exsposed.
Matthew Simkins:
I like the contrast between the two characters. The man's knee is bent at a funny angle between frames 20 and 60. Knees should usually be pointing in the same direction as the foot.
Ali Tezel:
Good animation man! I would recommend holding some poses longer as right now it is a bit floaty during his transitions.
arunprasad:
need more strong line of action
Adam Clark:
wonderful facial expressions.
Chris Reno:
man is too dramatic, he over-poses. old woman more reserved, much more appealing
Jay Grenier:
I like most of your acting choices, though a couple places could use a little life. Like when he is waiting for her response he dies in that pose, and the movement going into the next pose is very linear (t/s). The old woman isn't showing a whole lot of weight on her cane, especially when she puts her hand back on it, more polish there!
selvaraj:
Very nice animation
Mark Pearce:
I liked this one a lot, except for that head movement the orange guy does when he says "yes". Maybe it's just me but it looks really strange to me. I think its the timing of it, because watching it back slower it makes sense, but when played full speed it feels juttery and weird. Otherwise, really good!
anuraj:
nice acting ....totally good work









Animator: Steve Clarke
Description: Always great fun to do. Best of luck to everyone.
Experience: I tend to dabble in animation every so often
Time taken: All in all approximately 2 hours