Escelce-December entry

Final Rating: 4.93. Finished: 22 out of 63 entries.
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Animator: Steve Clarke

Description: Always great fun to do. Best of luck to everyone.

Experience: I tend to dabble in animation every so often

Time taken: All in all approximately 2 hours

Comments:

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Daniel Huertas:

the pops in the knees are a little distracting for me in the jump.. and the rest of the poses of the guy looks a little floaty.. tight your moving holds up and i think you will have a nice shot.. i like the acting choices for the old lady though.

luc:

Very nice. Only issue for me is that I found him too bouncy around at beginning. She looks great.

Emmanuel:

Good work! The animation flows well and the line of actions work here.

Tim Nowak:

How presentable! Nice flow of work. I think we have our second placer.

Steve Clarke:

My entry. I had to choose something as a rating otherwise it keeps asking and seen as i uploaded it i must be quite happy with it:)

Imus zai:

Excellent!
I think that the right hand pose on frame 86 should come abit earlier as he takes off the lid?

Taber Dunipace:

The motion is very soft and floaty, a hallmark of incomplete CG animation. Try to work on your timing and inbetweens.

Erik Westlund:

There is an interesting puppet quality to these two characters, especially the male 'gift giver'. Mrs. Munchnick character is pretty convincing in performance and movement. Male character is a little too exaggerated and knees are bending strangely (frames 24-58). Nice accent on the head of Mrs. M. on frame 269.

sharad kumar:

i think there is too much movement on the male character in the begining....the lady is fine.

HARISH:

i like the guys expressions . check the guys left leg knee ,its and odd break between 18-60 frames ..........rest looks good

Aaron Clement:

I like the old lady. I felt the guy's eyeline was off. He needs to be looking at the lady when speaking. The lighting is a bit over-exsposed.

Matthew Simkins:

I like the contrast between the two characters. The man's knee is bent at a funny angle between frames 20 and 60. Knees should usually be pointing in the same direction as the foot.

Ali Tezel:

Good animation man! I would recommend holding some poses longer as right now it is a bit floaty during his transitions.

arunprasad:

need more strong line of action

Adam Clark:

wonderful facial expressions.

Chris Reno:

man is too dramatic, he over-poses. old woman more reserved, much more appealing

Jay Grenier:

I like most of your acting choices, though a couple places could use a little life. Like when he is waiting for her response he dies in that pose, and the movement going into the next pose is very linear (t/s). The old woman isn't showing a whole lot of weight on her cane, especially when she puts her hand back on it, more polish there!

selvaraj:

Very nice animation

Mark Pearce:

I liked this one a lot, except for that head movement the orange guy does when he says "yes". Maybe it's just me but it looks really strange to me. I think its the timing of it, because watching it back slower it makes sense, but when played full speed it feels juttery and weird. Otherwise, really good!

anuraj:

nice acting ....totally good work