Mike York:

There are some nice things going on in here. Good job and nice polish

Hernán Bruna:

The best of the bests... i can just say that as a comment :P

Jason Smith:

Great timing/poses!

Sergey B.:

Good work!

Will Mann:

Great animation but the pencil seems to fly away on its own. Its a little distracting.

Tim Nowak:

Ooooo BURN!. Nice! i think we have our 3d placer

Emmanuel:

When he gives the fruitcake to Mrs. Munchnik, the camera was too close, maybe pulling it back and centering the camera, half body, will work.

Mathias Takacs:

nice job

Aaron Clement:

A little bit cliche at times... not sure the pointing was necessary. You've got a nice flow to your style of animating... so good job there.

Imus zai:

excellent!

Sunny Kharbanda:

Nice clear lines of action and some good facial work. The timing in the first few seconds needs some work though.

Erik Westlund:

I like your setup. I'm not so sure about the conclusion. You have decent line of action through your characters and the movements differ somewhat between the two. the 180 degree turn Mrs Munchnick makes a little forced and awkward, as is holding both hands up like a squirrel at the same level and same posture. I like the good hearted but obnoxious quality you give male character. Her reaction is also good natured in a way that I like. Nice rhythms and some poses have greater emphasis (good). Shot is a little crowded and claustrophobic.

Taber Dunipace:

Great animation quality but those acting choices are a bit weird. I can't really tell what the characters are thinking.

sharad kumar:

pencil could've fallen at the same place!!

Matt Kenley:

NICE.

Stanley:

good acting, great facial and lipsync, but need some follow trough on the body

Peter Carisi - de Lappe:

Good blocking. Needs work on the female's character gestures, but the man is not bad.

Chris de Souza:

This is great. That pencil flying out in the beginning is weird though. It almost seems like it's being pulled off by a string.

Ern:

i really like the femails facial expressions.

HARISH:

good one .... though i did'nt like him giving the cake on her face.

chia:

nice animation.great work.
chia

Michael Cawood:

I'm not sure that the cake stand would sit perfectly upright like that without an enormouse amount of counter weight at the bottom of the handle... but otherwise I like this piece a lot.

gerardo castellanos:

nice smooth movements!

Lee Olayvar:

Although i don't think it was quite expressive enough, i loved how technically smooth the animation felt!

Brad Regier:

i especially like his very confident "yes."

Jay Grenier:

I like your acting choices, and the animation is nice and polished! The first thing to catch my eye was the hand that is holding the cake is screaming "IK!". There are points when his body moves but the hand holding the cake doesn't move at all. Also, the woman's body is pink, but nothing about her movement suggests that she is a woman to me, I think her motion overall could be a little more womanly. Perhaps it's just the model though. =)

doc:

pink and blue, nice movements in the characters.

Ben Hammersley:

Great work, not to sure about the pointing, the voice doesn't sound like its strong enough for a point. Even so i would have liked to see the point emphasized on the word ''you'' . All very nice though.