Hernán Bruna:

Very good ^^ but i like if you were more creative with the idea, the expressions are great.

Tim Nowak:

FRUIT CAKE IS RECTANGLE. Just kidding. The movement in this is smooth and creative. The part where he waves the cake in her face made me laugh along with the facial expressions. Both of them reminded me of rubberbands for some reason. I like this aniamtion.

Daniel Huertas:

i like the last part.. and more the gilr acting... but still the guy doesn't look to appealing from that angle and the elbow was a little distracting making a weird silouette with his spine.. nice job overall..

Tyson Ibele:

Nice to see the progress of this one in the WIP section...I think the motions overall, but felt the lipsync could use some work.

Ken Rice:

This has improved a lot over the course of your WIPs - well done.

Emmanuel:

Nice work! Another thing I would add to this is when he waves the fruitcake around on her face, make her eyes follow the fruitcake and look at him. This could be another action that can be used.

Steve Clarke:

Is the guy drunk? If so great animation if not.well.tone down the wobbling i think:-)

Aaron Clement:

A little over the top in places... The squint didn't work for me. Some good exaggeration with the cake... but felt it needed to be more sincere.

Emmanuel Vergne:

the intentions are pretty clear and the changes of mood too. I like the way he tries to attract her when he shakes the cake in front of her

Taber Dunipace:

A little too much going on but nice animation quality. Try to think about what the audience is looking at in the picture and guide us around by limiting actions not in the spotlight, and making other things move more to draw attention to them.

Sunny Kharbanda:

I like the simple approach and the "teasing" with the cake. The lipsync needs work though.

Erik Westlund:

First action is out of scale with the rest of the piece, i.e. too big and fast. His affirmation that it is, in fact, fruitcake is over done as well. Does he really think he can 'tempt' her with a fruit cake? Waving the cake around is kinda silly in a fun way, but still 'too much'. The character interactions are connected seamlessly. I just wish you could have found a way to make his goofiness more appropriate and appealing.

sharad kumar:

this dialogue doesn't give scope to use motion blurs....its quite subtle.

Paulo Clayton:

I got to see this one in its early stages. I really like how far and how well you were able to develop it! Great work!

Peter Carisi - de Lappe:

Female is pretty good!

Max Herzfeld:

Good character and inbetween dialogue action.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Not bad, the animation is tight and the expression read correctly. There's a bit of a staging problem with the male character as we can't really see his whole expression. The lipsync could use some work also.

HARISH:

nice ................... the only thing i can say is the lip sync is off... otherwise a good

RaymondNg:

good!
The hand of the women in the last pose is quite odd

lizzie:

some nice bits. but he comes in a bit violently at the start.

Brad Regier:

pretty good acting,
His nod needs some mechanical attn

Dave H Shovlin:

I really like how he waves it in her face. Lovely acting.