Jason Smith:

I love the way she turns away from him...

luc:

Love it. Great composition and cut on shots. My 2 cents critique.

Not sure if you can lean this much and be comfortable:
-Frame19 his body, and right arm still move.
- frame6. Not sure so much head tilt is necessary.
-Around 295. Her turn seems a bit much, maybe one less step, or less rotation.

Daniel Huertas:

nice idea and you really improved your stagging and camera work.. but i still would work more in your arcs on your actions... too many linear movements and also flat moving holds... keep it up

Tom Law:

lol, the ending is excellent in this nicely done

Emmanuel:

haha nice ending. I like how she completely ignores him and looks back at the refrigerator.

Mathias Takacs:

wow

Avner Engel:

Solid, good acting choices and smart use of the camera. Well done!

Emmanuel Vergne:

everything seems too mechanical to me.
When the girls turns back to the fridge, i think her hips movement is too broad

Aaron Clement:

The guy was good... the ending with him was a lot better than the finger action you had in the forums... nice work there. I think the camera cuts helped as well. Just a tad cliche at times with the actions... The bench and fridge seemed to glow... Good improvement!

Chris Sacco:

I think that the woman needs to look/move a little more angrily.

Marco Roberts:

Lol I like the final touch

Erik Westlund:

Some little moments are good but... well... how many of these animations do we have to look at that basically say: "Any attitude different from the guy's point of view deserves contempt and derission". By the way, this reviewer is a guy. I say this because we have to speak to a wider audience, not just our selves. Her change in focus from refrigerator to fruitcake is working, her turn back to the fridge is labored and awkward... too many steps. She shows not change in pose or energy when making her final remarks... needs reversals/contrast. His nonchalance is very convincing (hummm... ).

Taber Dunipace:

Try to pose your characters a bit more naturally; film yourself for reference.

Mariya Kalachova:

The only thing that bothered me was the girls hips/legs seem to move unnaturally. Great otherwise.

Imus zai:

Excellent! I saw the WIP of this one- it looks great!

Mason Saucier:

He doesn't stir during her lines, which in real life is difficult not to move, so maybe a little could be added during her questioning. Also, her full body motions are very quick, such as the last movement being done in only 25 frames or so. Oh! I just noticed the eye darts, very good job!

Frank G:

Nice acting. Not sure about her turn back to the fridge - a bit crab-like. Really good key posing.

Tim Nowak:

Very good animation

Henning Koczy:

She needs to be more weighty, I think. The voice you were given sounds tired, doesn't she?

Markus Kallio:

body movements are bit too floaty, especially the girl in the end.

sharad kumar:

in that 'fruit cake' pose,u could avoid the excess shift of the pelvis..

Matt Kenley:

some parts are very good, and I can see your future animation will be great. However, there are some parts that are still stiff or dont read as well as they could. Keep it up!

Anirudh:

nice,couple of things - the girls head is floating from 137-151 so its doesnt look natural, the last part where he shows the gesture of the girl blabbering doesnt look rite...or may be because it abruptly ends the scene.

Eduardo Cavalcante Komaba:

haha this final is very funny! but sometimes the movement of the eyes look like mechanical

Joe Jacob:

Very nice. Could use a little more facial exaggeration though.

cecile:

be careful to the woman's spine

Michael Richard:

Make the poses differ more. ie the female;s pose at 212 and 243 are exactly the same with the body and head. There's no follow in motion of the body. More facial expression, nice subtle ending with the guy.

lizzie:

needs some clearer poses and actions

David Andrade:

Have her settle a little bit more into her pose she just kind of flattens into it. Have some fllowthrough in there..I like his eyes but there's too much blinking between the two that they become distracting.

He stands totally still, it feels a little odd, give him some keep alive.

There's a breath at 231 that you are missing in animation, that stuff is gold :)

Damian Isherwood:

Becareful that you don't lock the torso, when Mrs Muchnik lifts her shoulders there should be some torso motion(tilt) thats drives the movement, and that would alsostart from the hips ever so slightly.

Jay Grenier:

Remember body mechanics! The arms can't move without the torso moving, we aren't robots. =) I like your poses, but I think it needs more polish overall to get the bodies moving a little more with the acting. The weight on her arms and his lean could use some improvement as well.

Traci Plagmann:

This is pretty good. There are places where parts of her body seem to freeze - like right after she puts her hand on her hip everything freezes but her arm and then when she shrugs only her shoulders move. See if you can the rest of her moving a little during those parts and I think she'll feel more alive.

Dave H Shovlin:

Very strong acting. You could push your extremes a bit more. The gestures need a bit of follow through. The bit at the end is nice.

selvaraj:

good animation