Jason Smith:

Great timing!

luc:

Like the idea, not sure if it comes across.How does she know? smells it?

Tim Nowak:

What a Twist! Good animation

Tyson Ibele:

This one was neat...I liked the idea and the acting was done well...although the first few poses on the male (up to frame 100) don't read very well imo.

Steve Clarke:

I found the boy to be very distracting and a bit too over the top. The dialogue is of a guy speaking quite slow and yet most of the boys poses and movements are quite grand. I found the contrast unnatural if honest. I liked the idea though. Also maybe make her cane a bit lighter as it vanishes into the black background.

Anton de la Campa:

great idea! i would have really loved to see her do a little feeling around either before her first line or just before her closing line.
still has tons of potential!

Emmanuel Vergne:

the black background doesn't help to have a good clarity in the silhouette of the characters.
We do not see the cake and the lady' stick either.
the guy's poses don't feel natural at all

Erik Westlund:

Mrs. Munchnick character is much more believable than male counter part. Staging is getting in the way of gag. Perhaps he should move the cart in her direction a before she makes her final pronouncement. I like your treatment of Mrs. Munchnick.

Taber Dunipace:

Nice. I think the acting choices in the beginning are weird, but I like the rest.

Matt Kenley:

NICE, I love it, great out of the box idea to get a great reaction from your character.

ClintW:

great idea...maybe restaging it would make it come across better....

Aaron Clement:

Interesting concept. The background needed to be a different colour... they kind of merge into the background... What is the girl doing with her hand? A very akward pose by the guy at the end.

HARISH:

good one .. but i did not understand a couple of things :- where is the fruitCake ? if it is on the table ,then why is the guy not presenting her while wishing. and if the lady is blind, how does she know that it is a fruitCake without even touching it .

Imus zai:

great work! but i'm not too sure how the story works on this one but great acting!!!!

gerardo castellanos:

I don’t see any cake

David Andrade:

I think your character contrast here is great. I keep seeing this character though, andy, and everyone animates him soo bouncy. But there's no weight to it. There's no force.

326: is a good example where he pushes up, but it feels marionetty because his feet don't give any force, he doesn't bend his knees much , nor anticipates it. at 318 he just kind of goes into it and a veyr odd contorted way, clean up your silhouettes :D

Jay Grenier:

I like his reaction, but I think the idea overall needs some help to read more. I get she is blind, I get that she guesses it's a fruitcake and he is like "doh!", but I don't get how she knew it was like the one she got him last year. How does she know? You could have had her feel it or pick it up maybe? Something like that, not enough information right now.

adrian dawe:

i like he's reaction, but not the one i expected. great animation.

chia:

Nice Idea. Animation could be better. the guys leg could move and shift weight.
cheers,
chia

Allier Zelaya:

Good concept with the blind woman.

Dave H Shovlin:

The animation here is really strong. I'd add a bounce after 203. And you might be able to push the lean at 79 a little harder.

Dan Harriman:

good idea! However the staging could have been better. Render a silhouette of the scene and see how well it reads.

Julianne McCartney:

I wanted to see more expression from the man.

Lisa Taylor:

Great idea, pretty well animated too. well done.