Hernán Bruna:

Uhmm i think this could be better

Tyson Ibele:

Hi there...I think this one still requires quite a bit of polishing. All of the motions are very robitic, and there's not a whole lot of overlap. The poses were easy to read though.

Steve Clarke:

Very stiff movements and too much going on i think. Neither character seems natural if honest. Try to smooth out the movements and give the impression the characters are thinking.

Tim Nowak:

To much skippimg around and bad skit. good effort

Emmanuel Vergne:

don't not try to emphasize each word the lady is saying

Frank G:

That's a great catch he does for not looking. Very strong finishing poses that say it all. Her dismissive hand gestures were fun.

Taber Dunipace:

Needs better fundamentals.

sharad kumar:

animation looks stiff..keep working on smoothing it out.

Erik Westlund:

Movement is hitting and stopping exactly at each pose, no over-shoots and settles, no follow through. When staging characters, remember that they do not have to directly face one another in order to address each other on screen. Acting choices are a bit too grandiose and so not believable. Mrs. Munchnick makes too many, specific hand gestures while communicating her reason for rejecting the gift.

Cameron Huber:

There are times when the movements seem really robotic, plus her hand goes through her body towards the end. You have some good starting points here though

Henning Koczy:

Weightless and jerky. Sweet shoes though.

Katy Lambourne:

Too much movement, try for a bit more subtlety. It's great to keep the character moving, but tone it down a little bit to bring out some more 'quiet' movements - subconscious stuff that doesn't look planned. The arms on the female character move a bit too much I feel...

Damian Isherwood:

carefull of weight shifts, remember that when you shift your weight it comes for the hip first, also you need to have some sort of balance in order to actually shift the weight. Timing seems to be a bit linear in terms of movment, theres not much variation.

Paulo Clayton:

Nice effort. There seems to be a lot of extra movement that doesn't really need to be there, i.e. all the gestures made by Mrs. Munchnik while she's speaking her last line.

Aaron Clement:

I see where you're going with this...needs a lot of work, really. Watch the movements, they feel very mechanical... almost robotic. The acting at the end got a bit cliche... You don't have to be that literal.

HARISH:

both characters lack weight . looks linear too, but a good attempt.

Jason Smith:

Could use a bit stronger key poses, I like how he presents the cake.