Daniel Huertas:

very nice idea on the ejecution of the shot... but i still see that this clips is not finnished.. too many linear movements and "flat" holds... i hope you can finish it later and polish it so it would become a reel shot ;) .. keep it up

luc:

Nice. Still need work. Might have close in a bit on shot.

Tim Nowak:

The lip sync was great. The box didnt look real enough, wait thats the fruitcake?

Jason Smith:

I love her reaction to the cake.

Will Mann:

Good job. Just watch the Ik from around 117 to about 140.

Ken Rice:

Good effort - but I think your staging is a bit disjointed - it's difficult to know where to look.

Tyson Ibele:

Heheh...I like that last action :D

Overall, nice poses...but a bit stiff....would be nice to see a little more fluidity in the motions.

Emmanuel Vergne:

too mechanical, try to have your animation a little smoother

Chris Sacco:

Work on the timing a little. Things move too quickly at some points, like when they are moving their arms.

Imus zai:

Excellent!
1 to note - she has her mouth open i think abit too long before she says 'remarkably.........'

Taber Dunipace:

Ends too soon, we need to see his reaction. Everything is happening so fast, it gets monotonous.

sharad kumar:

Watchout for the hand movements ,they look fast.

Erik Westlund:

The arc and mechanical movement of thrown fruitcake are completely unbelievable. Transfer of fruitcake between characters is helped by downward pressure her grasp puts on his hand. Her fingers and hand are very rigid while gapping fruitcake. Line of action through her torso/spine is too rigid and straight.

HARISH:

i like the idea ,,,,,good one

lizzie:

cake falls funny

Anirudh:

nice, very good poses, nice contrast in timing..the right hand animation of the boy could be a bit smoother, it looks very snappy now, and same for the girls left hand, the transitions could be more softer. bt very gud overall.

Aaron Clement:

Good staging. They felt a little bit like puppets at times. You need more overlap and offseting of arms and actions. Things don't all rest at the same time... not if they're real characters... remember, where trying to creative the suspension of believe that they're real characters.

Brad Regier:

It's good that she smells it. That's a nice touch no-one else has thought of yet.

Ambuj:

nice!! The timing of breathing after she smells it is bit off. Nice ending!