Ken Rice:

Not bad - but feels a little floaty.

Hernán Bruna:

I like that their are moving every time but the movementes are too relax and slows, made me thing they'r high haha

Tyson Ibele:

The motions were nice and fluid in this one, but the woman was lacking well-defined poses. It would be nice to see her actions a little more grounded and less wavy.

lizbeth:

very swimmy. you need to hold into your key poses...like when he presents it to her

Emmanuel Vergne:

Try to fix some poses : everything is always moving, so nothing really attracts the attention

Johan Fruh:

Nice poses and expressions. :)
But I've got the impression they sway a bit too much. They drank a bit too much egg nog? ;)

And carefull with having the two last expressions at the same time. We need a bit of time seeing her get mad, before we can see him react to it.

Chris de Souza:

I like the guy on the left, but I think you need to vary your movement timing up a bit. Remember that it's always best to have fast, medium and slow speeds during a scene.

Chris Sacco:

The character actually move around a bit too much at point. The bodies are not moving to accentuate the dialogue, but are just drifting around at points.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Nice effort.. animation gets too smooth and mushy at times. A few actions, e.g. her smelling the cake, could be sharper and snappier.

Taber Dunipace:

The motion is very soft and floaty, a hallmark of incomplete CG animation. Try to work on your timing and inbetweens. Ends too soon.

Tim Nowak:

A lot of movement

Jules Nerestant:

Good animation overall. A bit floaty at parts, espescially in the second half when the woman speaks. Her transition to the last pose doesnt work very well.

Erik Westlund:

Too much 'floaty' movement. characters, especially Mrs. Munchnick, never really settle into a pose. There is no believable connection between characters to show why he reacts to her anger at the end. Her anger just arrives and he simply recoils.

Sachin:

looks little floaty to me.....

Mat Brady:

Floaty. Needs definite poses.

sharad kumar:

The cake remarkably ' looks' like the one given last year...So,why does she has to smell that..she has to see it properly!

Marco Roberts:

A little bit floaty but its good. Maybe more expression?

Matthew Simkins:

good effort but very floaty. You need to pick your poses and hold them rather than smoothly pass through them.

Dan Weiland:

Looking good! I think the male character's back hand looks a bit floaty - especially at the very beginning. But otherwise solid :)

Chris Reno:

very nice, except the woman's body is floaty

RaymondNg:

I like the motion of the word "yes"!
but,
The right hand of the man is quite odd.

HARISH:

nice one !!!

Jonathan Paquin:

Hold your poses a bit more, the characters are always moving so it gives them a bit of a floaty "in space" kinda look.

James Wilson:

not bad. your holding poses seem a bit floaty. you'll get it with more practice. on the right track though

Jason Smith:

Poses are a little 'swimmy', great facial animations though.

Aaron Clement:

A little bit floaty in places... Try having more moving holds.

Damian Isherwood:

Watch out for floaty limbs.

Jay Grenier:

Cool acting choices, but the timing is a bit sluggish in places. Speed up some of those movements and it will improve a lot. Nice work. =)

Dan Harriman:

I like the guys face before he says "yes". But perhaps the whole thing is a bit too fluid. Find some good poses for each character and hold them for a while. At the moment they give the impression of being underwater.

Mark Pearce:

Nice animation all around! But it seems to me that towards the last half (especially with the character on the right) you seem to be moving her for no reason at all and it looks like shes drunk because shes swaying all about. Otherwise, good job!

Lisa Taylor:

Some really nice expression and gestures in there. The only thing I would suggest is that it's a little floaty, try hitting hard into some movements and experiment with you're timing a bit. Really nice though, well done