Daniel Huertas:

need more work on your moving holds and settles.. check your overshoots also... keep it up

Tim Nowak:

Good work but needs to me more cartoony if thats what your getting at. Practice makes perfect

Tyson Ibele:

Hey,

I liked some of the snappy movements, but a few of them were too wobbly. Would have been nice to see a few more well-defined poses.

Ken Rice:

Fun to watch but I felt like a little too much is going on in the scene and some movements in the male's torso looked strange to me.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Nice weight and lines of action. A few of the poses seem unnecessary. But overall I enjoyed watching it.

Imus zai:

great effort! could be abit smoother in the begining.. but good try!

Frank G:

I enjoyed this clip. Great weight in the cake. Nice cherry lift and place. Good acting. Best so far.

Taber Dunipace:

Pretty good, but we need to see what the characters are thinking and feeling.

sharad kumar:

i like the way he keeps the cherry back on top!!..... u could've made his actions a lil bit more subtle.

Erik Westlund:

You have some distinct differences movement and performance between the two characters. Mrs. Munchnick is much more believable than is the male character. He is exaggerated in his enthusiasm while simultaneously paranoid to the point of looking over his shoulder; eager to please and outgoing, yet easy to disappoint. Too fragmented. Having his hands remain close to the body in broad, exaggerated poses isn't working. The smaller gag with the bit that falls off and is replaced has some appeal. This rig seems to require a simpler line of action or else appear bent or broken.

Joe Garhan:

really nice! with a little more time could be a winner

Henning Koczy:

I love him hauling it in, then he has a sneer on his face like he's only giving it to her cos he hates her. And I thought that would've been sweet if he was sarcastic throughout, but he loses it.
Nice weight. Really overactive, though.

Kenny:

I liked the acting of the male voice character.

Muhammad Azhari:

need try another way/style to bring the cake get in to the room. good job :)

Mat Brady:

Very good.

Matt Kenley:

very nice.

lizzie:

love the weight of the cake.

Dan Dulberger:

Abit too zippy, ie some moves are too fast and I don't feel it fits that well with the audio.

Andrew Linke:

i like the secondary action of the male character, picking up crumbs etc.

Dan Harriman:

Your moving holds need work. It's weird the way he carries the heavy cake in. (frame 10) your poses are nice, although it wasn't clear to me why he looked around nervously before answering "yes". I like this one its kind of cute.

Aaron Brewer:

I love the pose you gave him when he says "yes"

danyeal:

i like the move on "yes"

HARISH:

good one !!

gerardo castellanos:

I like your details, need more smothness

David Andrade:

I like how he's really nervous. I think you could do it better though, Like small things bother me. 390 look at his screen right leg... ouch!

I like her too, but same thing. What if you kept her movements slower compared to his more snappier quicker movements? Contrast in motion and in character! That's powerful stuff.

Nice squashy and stretchy but it takes away from the animation i feel

Aaron Clement:

I like the squint of the guy at the end. Felt very linear in places... Needs more overlap and follow through... Don't have everything stop on a dime like that... Silhouette wasn't too bad.

Allier Zelaya:

The male character seems to be stretching too much.

V_I_C_K_Y:

I knw dis rigg, itz not too gd with spine, but U did manage it some how..Nice.

Jason Smith:

I love when he puts the berry thingy back onto the cake... great touch.

Jay Grenier:

I like the timing! Good quick movements, one of the first I've seen with good timing. Nice work! My suggestion would be that the guys COG doesn't move a lot of the times when his torso is moving, or if it is it's not enough to notice (aka enough to distract).

mohinder kaur:

Animation on the guy is very comical! Acting and expressions are really good. Love the little touchs handling the cake through out.