Cat Cake
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Tim Nowak:
What's with her mouth? Everything is too sloooow. It's good enought though.
Emmanuel:
The staging is good, but it needs a little more action between the two.
Aaron Clement:
I like the style. The blinks were too slow, though. Too little movement... Needs more emotion/expression.
Frank G:
He's trying for a sneaky snog under the cat nip. This clip is charged full of romance.
sharad kumar:
atleast give head accents up and down!!
Erik Westlund:
Cute concept shifting the conversation to that of a male tom-cat trying to tempt a female, but there is virtually no animation going on here. This is beyond 'limited animation'. Floating eyes, no change in posing, no discernible line of action, heads are both perfectly level, etc. The tail with mistletoe (?) doesn't even move. Too many missed opportunities.
Cameron Huber:
There is no movement apart from the eyes and mouth, and they seem really wooden at the moment. You have some neat characters and it would be wicked to see them moving around :D
Matt Kenley:
its refreshing to see some 2d.. just wish you would have done more with it.
Ryan Brooks:
the lipsync needs some work.
Dan Weiland:
I like the artistic style - but the animation could use quite a bit of work. Eye blinks aren't that even on the way up and down - try getting the eyelids down faster than they move coming back up.
Imus zai:
the blinks aree too linear - they need to be quicker and more natural! but good try!
Allier Zelaya:
Seems like it cut off.
Jay Grenier:
Neat idea, but I think you could have taken it a bit further. Eyes and eyelids don't really drift, they dart, so if eyes are the only thing that is going to be moving they should have lots of quick movements and make sure they're polished a lot. Cool character design. =)









Animator: Mike
Description: Flash cat flirts with posh cat.
Experience: Two years in higher education.
Time taken: Six days.