Kate Carlyle:

timed out ok to the soundtrack but the visual are intentionally at odds with audio? it's pretty coy. the mechanics are good, but it's disorienting because the characters are very arbitrary (two men) and the motion is based on a quick forward stroll? so it's arbitrary without a rational behind the acting...

Ken Rice:

Nice idea but the animation isn't quite there yet.

luc:

Nice idea, but I found his poses rushed, or too many. No time to read it all.

Tim Nowak:

I like how both of them walk but need a lot of work. Too skippy sort of speak. Like a broken record or a Scratched CD. Whats with the humpback dude walking like that anyways. Nice plot though.

Jason Smith:

The black is too distracting.

Emmanuel Vergne:

be careful with black background : we don't clearly read the poses
i think the "guy" moves way too much

Taber Dunipace:

Too much happening all at once; I don't know where to look. The characters are flailing around like they're having seizures, keep their motions simple and under control.

Mariya Kalachova:

The movement seems fairly unnatural. But good start.

Sunny Kharbanda:

why are they walking?

Erik Westlund:

Buster Keaton-esque gag is completely out of place for this audio, or at least you haven't sold it to me yet. Poses are unnatural and gestures are way too big... especially the first one on "Merry Christmas Mrs. Munchnick." He isn't screaming the line like the George Bailey character would from "Its a Wonderful Life".

sharad kumar:

if u have to do something like this ..i guess u should hv taken a mid shot of the characters..

Mat Brady:

A lot of effort to get them to walk during this, but why??? Wasted effort. Should have spent more time polishing the anims that were important, not having them walk would have done this.

Matt Kenley:

some extra stars for ambition. This was pulled off well for how much you tried to do... props.

Marco Roberts:

interesting touch with adding the walk cycle but some movements are very sharp.

Joe Jacob:

Lighting is too dark, can't make out a lot of the animation.

Dan Harriman:

looks like you're making things a bit tough on yourself by having them walking. I'd suggest acting out all the movements in your animation so you can see how it actually physically works.

HARISH:

joints popping all over the scene... that quickly grabs attention. even though you kept the background black , i still feel that the legs are sliding. needs a lot of work to be done.

Ricardo Silva:

One of the principles of animation is to make things simple. take that into account on your next animation.

Adam Clark:

All over the place, I dont know where to focus my attention

Aaron Clement:

The walk by the red dude felt good. I don't know why you chose a black background... your characters disappeared in the background. A little random with the guy stepping in front like that.

doc:

a lot of poping

deenad:

twistyy???

jonathan fontaine:

the idea of the walking dialogue is great