two mice and a lil fruitcake
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NICK D:
love the characters but the lady mouse just doesn't show enough emotion for me.
Will Mann:
Overall it is way too stiff and unemotional.
Ken Rice:
Cute and simple but needs more life and variety I think.
Steve Clarke:
To be honest I found the constant wobbling and moving up and down quite distracting. I like the style of drawing though.
Tim Nowak:
i think we have our 4th placer
Emmanuel:
Mrs. Munchnik looks like she's flexing. Maybe turn her head to see the fruitcake and back to normal pose can work.
Aaron Clement:
I like the designs. Felt like I was watching an animated billbord. Felt very staged and cliche... needs a lot of work with the acting... more tlc.
Emmanuel Vergne:
too much stuff happen everywhere when a character talks, so that we don't really pay attention to what he or she is saying
Frank G:
2D. This is the first 2D clip I've got to rate. Hooray for that. Poor guy has a mighty bad ear ache? A bold attempt at limited animation.
Chris Sacco:
The characters need to move from those positions more. Also, try adding squash and stretch to the sympbols as they speak.
Erik Westlund:
characters do not appear to be reacting/relating to one-another at all. They are moving like big, moving billboards from the 1950s with pivoting limbs and heads but nothing happening from the neck down.
Katy Lambourne:
Too much head swinging back and fourth - they look like head bobblers! The lip sync is relatively ok, but the eyes have no expression and this is what will make limited animation work. There's far too much motion tweening which doesn't really make it believable, it would have helped to chuck in a couple of new frames to mix it up a bit. And that anime embarrassment drip at the end just really kills it!!
HARISH:
body is too stiff, there are too many repeatative shapes . the head movement of both the characters is just swinging side by side linearly.
Joe Jacob:
Need more tweens. More body animation.
Ryan Brooks:
her arms need work, they just seem to be moving to keep em moving.
Dan Harriman:
Its a pity those mouths are smiling every time they have to talk.
Ern:
simple is a great way to go. more body movement though. so we now there "alive".
Adam Clark:
im not into after effects for character animating, too stiff
Nawaz:
the characters look good, the xpressions on the blue one is good, but i guess u should hav added more poses especially for the pink one coz its in one body pose with a bit of a floaty movmnt
lizzie:
their heads seem to just be moving around for no reason, you should use the movement to emphasize words.
nice lip sync though
David Andrade:
Coo lidea but there's a bit tooo much movement and your eyes are having to jump back and forth. Plus I think if you cropped into one of the characters to create a "different cut" it would add some rythm to the whole thing :)
Nice characters but try to vary them a little bit more too. Lip sync is ok
Damian Isherwood:
The animation itself needs alot of work, but Imust say I think you really did a nice job on the lip sync.
Jay Grenier:
Neat concept, but that animation needs a lot of work. The lip sync is decent, but the twinning arms and the blue guys randomly swaying arm aren't helping at all. On top of that the bodies don't move whatsoever.
Cameron Huber:
I like the characters but the movements float way too much
Jason Smith:
Their heads seem really bobbley to me.
Dave H Shovlin:
I think the bodies ought to move here.









Animator: Radhika
Description: i made this in Flash and its my first upload to this site (go easy on me!) :D
Experience: im still a beginner !
Time taken: a few days