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This is about you Abigail...

by marco

Final Rating: 6.11. Finished 8 out of 54 entries.

21,747 views including the voting period.

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Animator: marco

Description: A dialogue between mother and daughter

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 18 days

Comments:

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Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice animation, but the composition of these shots are quite awkward and they feel very tight in a bad way which comes with the characters' heads tangent the frame throughtout.

Fredrik Larsson:

Really solid foundation and the secondary motion is great too.
I would try and add some anticipation and follow through on the poses though, try and avoid the look you get with just auto tangents between the poses.

S.:

Some nice moves there. Just hold on to few keys, and it will be great...