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Where are the seatblets?

by Emir Paynter

Final Rating: 4.99. Finished 39 out of 105 entries.

388 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Emir Paynter

Description: A man confesses his devotion for the one sitting, despite the fact that he's asking for a seatbelt on a motorcycle.

Experience: I did a 2 years High technical degree on Animation, Videogames and Interactive Enviroments

Time taken: Around 3 weeks, with 4 or 5 hours per day

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Michael Snyder:

Great animation in some parts. But some areas need improvement. When the character on the bike leans side to side he comes to a complete stop. Give a little more of an ease in to his movements.

Beth Rowe:

Emphasise the characters more. The body language needs to be much strong to match the voice clip