Carlos Guadarrama:

The lipsync is missing a few bits, especially the OH's at the beginning, I'm not feeling them

Vincenzo:

The idea it's good and the animation too, you need to improve the lipsync

Brian W.:

Keyboard shots were brave and ambitious even if they fell a bit short. Work on conveyance of mass. Nice camera movement.

Kevin McCullough:

camerawork is a bit distracting, I think it would work a lot better with fewer moves and cuts, it would highlight your really good animation better