Nathan Younger:

great planting on the main character movement

Dalton Krajewski:

The weight of the character when he sits on the desk feels very realistic and believable. Well done on that! The walk was also exceptionally well executed. I feel like some of the character's movements could have more of an "arc" to them, and I think the female character could benefit from a few more subtle movements and moving holds, but overall this is an excellent piece!

Harishankar Thiyagarajan:

What I like is: Lipsync is good. Some poses are good

What could be changed: Acting, Body movements such as head, spine and hip. Hip needs to worked more when walking and sitting in the awkward position.