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Another day at the office

by P Carey

Final Rating: 3.46. Finished 97 out of 138 entries.

343 views including the voting period.

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Animator: P Carey

Description: Man in office gives advice

Experience: some

Time taken: Off and on couple weeks.

Comments:

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Eric Raffle:

not enough motion or expression its very linear

Dalton Krajewski:

The animation looks very nice and cohesive, but the movements seem very puppet-like in the sense that the mouth moves independently of the rest of the face and the limbs seem to act independently as well. Having more follow-through, such as the motion starting in a certain place like the shoulder and carrying the attached pieces with it, would make the character feel much more alive--coupled with some more dynamic poses.

Carolyn Mennecke:

His head bobs a lot, and his other arm should move more. Be expressive!