Comments:
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Vanessa Gonzalez:
I think the lip sync could use a little work. His lips move a little too fast like he's trying to pronounce each syllable. You should probably make his lips flow a little more like in the "ssion" in the word "expression" and from the "ow" to the "i" in "knowing".
Ryan D Lowe:
Subtle. Which works really well! The lip sync is very chatty though! Tone down that jaw!
Aaron Clement:
Nice staging. Lip sync needs work. Pacing feels great, though.
Amartya Mukherji:
Liked the concept and staging. I felt acting could have been a bit more matured.
Liviu Boar:
too bad about the lip sync...
Robert Holmen:
His mouth animation is very poppy. Too many motions.
Richard Clark:
Needs more change in posture. They seem to stay in the same pose throughout.
Danny Kneip:
Good atmosphere, nicely paired with the audio. The sync is pretty good. Her reaction in the middle of the dialogue is very readable and well done, but I feel they should not have looked away at the same time at the end.
Animator: Caleb Rankin
Description: Two Friends have found themselves discussing their relationship wondering where they are at. She is hopeful and he wants it to stay a friendship.
Experience: I've been animating for about a year as a student
Time taken: I worked on this all month