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3D Character Animation

by Beiyi Chua

Final Rating: 4.44. Finished 88 out of 162 entries.

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Animator: Beiyi Chua

Description: im 1st time to join this competition , hope u guys like it

Experience: student

Time taken: 2weeks

Comments:

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Per Cardell:

You have some cool stuff going on here. But it he would be even cooler if his body moves would be tuned down a bit. Keep it up!

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good start :)
try to track some parts of his body to make better arcs! :)

James Van Dam:

A little over animated. Sometimes less is more.

Aaron Clement:

Nice first pose. Needs more polish... but i like the acting choices.

Muhammad Arsal:

nice

Matt Horstman:

face could use some work

Ryan D Lowe:

That arc motion throughout F55 needs a lot of work. Start by toning down I think. Love he's chewing on something though. Fits the audio/feel.

Amartya Mukherji:

very nice flow lines but too much liquidy motion. There are a few jitters here and there, specially in the right hand

Pranav Kumar:

where is the lipsinc..?

Danny Kneip:

The lip sync needs additional polishing and the gestures seem more exaggerated than perhaps necessary. Overall, you have good control over the puppet - really good eyebrow movement from F43 to about F63, and nice blinks. The final resting position of the fingers, especially the pinky, seems stiff. The arm definitely goes through his leg at F148. Nice work overall.