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Animator: Patrick Høiseth

Description: Someone is called in for a intimate interview.

Experience: Recently graduated

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement:

A little floaty. Good posing.

Amartya Mukherji:

There is a lot of scope for improvement. Try to figure out the timing after you visualize the acting you want to do, then start animating a shot. Shooting your own video reference would help you a lot.

srinivasarao:

dull acting.....needs to improve alot.

Danny Kneip:

Interesting composition and lighting. Nice strumming of the fingers, but probably 2 strums would have sufficed. The lip sync is a tad off, but there's good potential here.

Richard Clark:

To floaty...work on timing.

Thomas Edward:

Perhaps adjust your lighting for this shot - it's a bit hard to read the dark character against the black background.

Kartick Pramanik:

you should scale down eleven charector head............then only its look adult guy.